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lovely_masoka

New Multichapter fic

Dec 22, 2010 05:07

Title: Surprise
Fandom::Bleach
Rating: PG-13
Summary: One night of passion, sets Ulquiorra and Orihime up for the rest of their life.
Character(s): Ulquiorra x Orihime.
Warnings: Pregnant/family fic
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite
Bete'd: none
Chapters: 1/?
Notes: Multichapter fic. Will only last about 3 chapters, 4 at most. I plan to finish ( Read more... )

writing: fan fiction, fic story: surprises, series: bleach, pairing: ulquiorra x orihime

Comments 6

espadadina December 22 2010, 13:45:58 UTC

*fangilrsqueeeessss* <333333333333333333

Gosh I'm so excited about this fanfic *u* it's... thehehe~ <333 I so want know that will happens next *jumping up an down* I'm sure this will get even better on this~~~~~~~~~<3333333333333333333333333

Urururuuruururrururururu
I'm so haappyyyyyyyyy~~~~~<333333 *Hugs*

lovely_masoka December 22 2010, 20:05:43 UTC

Heehee I hope I don't disappoint you then! *starts on chapter 2*

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it. ;A; <333333 *HUGS*

myahle December 22 2010, 19:44:42 UTC

Ahhhhhh!!! *loves* It's so adorable ♥ I like how you progressed with a timeline, and kept both in character. I can't wait to see how April turns out, haha! Poor Ulqui.
Gahh ~ Looking forward to the next chapter ~

lovely_masoka December 22 2010, 20:08:11 UTC

I was worried if they were IC, especially at the end. ;A; So I'm so happy you think they are! And yes the timeline...I'm experimenting with my writing, so I'm glad it worked out. >////<

Haha Poor Ulquiorra XD Especially next chapter. fufufufu

*HUGS* Thank you! I hope to have it up before Christmas. *is on a schedule*

phoenix089 December 30 2010, 04:18:28 UTC

Oh, Issues~ I am so loving this idea.

I think you handled everything in a realistic way - the way that Orihime worries about the fact that she would (at the time thought) be a single mum and the whispers that come with that, and just ... How, even though it mightn't make sense, the fact that she wanted the bub.

But Ulquiorra's "Well, that can't be right. I'm a Hollow" logical attitude, followed by his adorkable "Then, that's what we'll do" <33 Love.

*skips away to read the next chappie*

Also - Loving Tatsuki >W

lovely_masoka December 30 2010, 04:51:28 UTC

Thank you so much! ;A; I'm so happy you like it. <333

And thanks, I was worried how "IC" and such I could make this situation. And of course...Ulquiorra and not having it filled to drama back and forth, but not having everything happy and easy.

*HUGS* I'm so happy you like it. *means a lot*