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Oct 24, 2010 03:19

Title: Within the Heart
Fandom::Bleach
Rating:PG
Summary: Takes place during the month time skip between 422-423 and what if
Ulquiorra came back during that time and Orihime's reaction. Ulquihime
Character(s): Ulquiorra x Orihime.
Warnings: none
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite
Bete'd: My lovely frotu helped me. ♥
Chapters: none
Notes: FFnet: Read more... )

writing: fan fiction, series: bleach, pairing: ulquiorra x orihime

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anonymous October 24 2010, 09:05:02 UTC
I rather liked this fic. It was quite original and refreshing in terms of the "what if" concept that Ulquiorra might have returned back in one piece and found Orihime somehow during the timeskip. I liked how you also dealt with the possibilty that Orihime accepting Ulquiorra might be in the wrong; that's also a refreshing concept. The ending warmed my heart though. Awwwww.

It's funny if you think about it. The dragon fell for the princess. And if the dragon returns, the princess might fall for him back. Sorry, I'm a sucker for these things. <3

Lovely work as usual. You're awesome! :)

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anonymous October 24 2010, 09:35:52 UTC
I also liked the scene between Rukia and Orihime. It was really a strong scene. It would be nice if it happened in the manga.

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jczala October 24 2010, 10:29:41 UTC
Numero Quatro has returned for his woman.

It was such a touching fic. Very refreshing and interesting to read. I like the little bonding moment between Rukia and Orihime there. But of course, the UlquiHime scenes were my favorite here.

Every scene came out smoothly, naturally. I really admire the way you write your stories. Good job.

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lovely_masoka October 24 2010, 18:28:22 UTC
Yes he has. <3~

^//^ Thank you! I really loved writing the Rukihime scene, I want something like that to happen in canon.~ <3 I'm very happy you like it.

Really? >///< That makes me very happy you like how I write.

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animeangel4eva October 24 2010, 20:31:45 UTC
Whoa, this certainly made me catch my breath when I read this.
Great job! :D

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lovely_masoka October 31 2010, 22:50:04 UTC
Heehee! Thank you so much! *hearts;

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rue_foot October 25 2010, 04:25:25 UTC
Oh, lovely, lovely! The Rukihime scene is so tender and understanding--I love fic in which Orihime displays her emotional intelligence. I want more manga scenes like this, now.

And the ending! Oh! I have no words.

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lovely_masoka October 31 2010, 22:50:49 UTC
>///< Thank you! Yes and I do too, Orihime is a lot more understanding then people give her credit for.

XD I hope that is a good thing.

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angelchan_2004 October 26 2010, 22:44:24 UTC
<333

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lovely_masoka October 31 2010, 22:51:03 UTC
<33333

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