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inugrlrayn in lovelusthonour

What I Should Have Said

Oct 13, 2006 04:22

Title: What I Should Have Said
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: RoyxEd

Author's Notes: Written for my darling Tsu. An angsty one-shot inspired by the lyrics of Hurt by Christina Aguilera.

( the words licked wickedly at his ears as dark hair skimmed Ed’s face, the older man’s body pressing teasingly against his own, sliding easily against the leather pants he wore. )

Comments 11

elegantpaws May 3 2008, 03:55:23 UTC

I'm in heaven. I just discovered you. Oh joy oh bliss and I do hope this became a multiparter.

inugrlrayn May 3 2008, 04:00:06 UTC

It's been a long time since I've written and I'm finally coming back to it. Glad you like my fics.

kiss4therain February 25 2009, 01:09:25 UTC

Even better than the last one I read. I mean I love how you potrayed Ed. You managed to make him emotional without taking away from his personality. Most writer's can't do that and I'm impressed and jealous. Love how the story is so open and doesn't really have an ending...yeah it's annoying but I like it better this way...let's my imagination run wild. I almost cried there (okay maybe I did a little)