(Final Fantasy) Shards (8/?)

[lovelesschocobo]

Title: Shards

Rating: PG-13

Characters/Parring: Angeal Hewley/Cloud Strife

Timeline: Post Advent Children

Warnings: Follows the basic timeline, but takes liberties with Crisis Core

Summary: There are some memories lost to Cloud, but hopefully the shards could be recovered. Hopefully the pieces could be put back in place by a gentle, patient hand.

Comments

[fire_by_fire]

You are here again! I missed you sooo much! Don't do this okay, please? Please?

I almost felt how much Angeal missed his Buster Sword and I think that Cloud's amnesia hurt him too. Touching, beautiful chapter. Could tell me if there will be more about Cloud's past in next chapter?

[lovelesschocobo]

I'm sorry, had to put this on hold when I was finishing up some things with my book. But back on track again! :)

Angeal is feeling very conflicted this chapter. He doesn't know why Cloud doesn't remember and he wants to tell him everything, but at the same time he's trying to keep a respectable distance until Cloud is ready. I feel sort of bad for putting him through this....

There should be. Cloud doesn't want to walk around with these fragments floating around in his head and no answers.

[fire_by_fire]

Where are you? I miss you so much :(

[hollow_death]

woot, just found this and I'm liking where this fic is heading! It's refreshing to see this pairing, aside from my usual OTP, clack or somethings seph/cloud, its nice to have pairing that is less common but the concern is, its rare.. Lol

Anyway, so far the development is nice however I do have a complain is that this story seems to be a bit of disjointed from some chapters to another, or perhaps that wat you intended to do..

Anyway, I hope you will keep writing, this fic deserves more love than it is getting!

<3

[history13041985]

I love you idea (using the lose of memory of Cloud).