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lovekevinjonasb

Convincing (Stripper Verse)

Jan 25, 2014 22:36

Title: Convincing (4th part of my stripper verse)
Pairing: Joick (not related)
Rating: R (this part)
( Summary: Nick hopes Joes resistance is crumbling after their awesome kiss and he´s ready to show him that giving up isn´t an option for Nick. )

stripper!verse, pairing: nick/joe, incest, what else can i say, joick, fanfic, smut, rating r, sex

Comments 26

mouse42069 January 26 2014, 06:37:39 UTC

Joe is such a tease. I think Nick has won Joe's heart over and they are going to give being together a chance. I can't wait for more.

lovekevinjonasb January 26 2014, 09:42:23 UTC

It wouldn´t be much fun if Joe would simply give it up for Nick ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting ^^

anonymous January 26 2014, 11:37:50 UTC

I've posted this already but it didn't show up :/ anyway so glad you updated :D joe's panties were pink at first then they turned black ? haha
it's so hot how he teases nick omg didn't expect that lol
and I don't knowcif this is considered a spoiler but what did joe's exes do to him exactly I don't fully get it ? anyway thank you for this part . it was short but extremely hot and worth the wait <3 can't wait for next part.I hope there is more drama.INTENSE DRAMA.

lovekevinjonasb January 26 2014, 13:52:22 UTC

Whoopsie xD I´ll change the colour of the panties so they´ll stay pink.

There´ll be more of what exactly happened to Joe in his former realtionships in the next part ;)

anonymous February 4 2014, 01:07:29 UTC

oh please just a hint please? it's bad enough that the next chapter won't be up until after maybe 2 months. I need hints of this fic in my life haha

lovekevinjonasb February 4 2014, 17:17:04 UTC

ALTHOUGH you´re mocking me (it *hopefully* won´t take me two month to update) I´ll tell you one thing ;)

Sooooooooooooooo ...

... the fiction definitely will contain at least one Jonas ;P

Thread 8

anonymous January 27 2014, 22:10:51 UTC

"stop looking at me like that"
^^^ what ? you're a stripper !!!! hahaha

"and taking his shaking hands just to hold them"
awwww you still manage to keep it sweet with all the hot and teasing parts.This is adorable it's frustrating :D loved all of this.lots of funny lines as well

lovekevinjonasb January 27 2014, 22:26:20 UTC

*swoons* Thanks :D

anonymous January 31 2014, 00:20:13 UTC

aww I was waiting for them them to kiss again but instead we got some teasing! so cruel :P
I also wanted to say something bout how nick only wants to date joe because he's a hot stripper while he doesn't know much about his personality but you beat me to it here "Of course it's not just Joes body that gets to him..."

I must also say that I really love how each chapter is the P.O.V of either one of them.I did need to know how both felt about that kiss :)

lovekevinjonasb January 31 2014, 16:30:15 UTC

I noticed too that Nick doesn´t really know Joe and he can´t really say if they´ll work out or if they won´t but he wants to try and get to know Joe better. Guess that´s a good start :)

Thanks for your comment :D Next part will be Joes POV ;)

anonymous February 2 2014, 21:22:29 UTC

*.* oh my god the teasing at the end vey very very hot I actually thought nick was going to see smth.I need next part NOW PLEASE lol

lovekevinjonasb February 2 2014, 21:54:16 UTC

I´m sadly not so fast with the writing but I´m happy to hear that you liked it and can´t wait for the next part :D