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Changes (Joick) Part 13

Nov 03, 2013 12:20

Title: Changes
Pairing: Joick (not related)
Rating: Nc17
Warnings: AU, A/B/O dynamics, knotting, self-lubrication, cheating (not the boys), the boys are ´round 15/16, jealous/possessive!Nick, “it-girl”!Joe (or should I´ve called him it-boy?)
( Summary: Nick´s an alpha and a troublemaker so his parents send him to a boarding school for boys. They have no idea that Nick´s gay and that this school is some kind of heaven for him. He´s planning on getting into as many pants as possible. The beautiful omega he lays eyes on first unfortunately is in a relationship and isn´t interested in cheating on his boyfriend. But Nick soon realizes that he can´t move on and when he finds out that the omegas boyfriend isn´t as faithful as he thought he is, he sees his chance to get what he wants. )

pairing: nick/joe, incest, what else can i say, joick, alpha/omega, nc17, fanfic, smut, sex

Comments 26

anonymous November 3 2013, 16:34:05 UTC

Lol I absolutely loved Joes dads "Just remember I own a gun and shovel" cracked me up! I'm glad Joes parents accepted it in the end, can't wait to see Nicks parents reaction :)

lovekevinjonasb November 3 2013, 19:54:21 UTC

:) thanks

anonymous November 3 2013, 18:17:54 UTC

Ohh so so sweet and lovely:}and its really funny how nick returned a favour by feeding him with awful pancakes ;)and the last sentence with a gun and a shovel:Dyou made my day,thank you very much:)but I really want some drama,not too big,maybe a little;)you know ,feelings,emotions and worries,I think it makes this story even more interesting:)but maybe not something ,which is associated with betrayal, or cheat,cuz they seem so in love and its just impossible to cheat on each other:/I think maybe there can be something with separation,you know maybe nick's parents ,out of blue ,want to move out of the town by some reason and nick would be dying to choose what to do or something like that,but its up to you,anyway;)thanks for such a great story,already can't wait for me=}

lovekevinjonasb November 3 2013, 19:57:54 UTC

Thanks :) I´m almost thankful for suggestions for most of the time I don´t know what to write till I write it. Though that way my stories are just as new to me as they are to you ;D

mouse42069 November 4 2013, 02:10:52 UTC

Nick was so sweet to clean up the blood and make breakfast even if it was bad. I'm glad Joe's parents finally were happy with the matting. I hope Nick's parents will be ok. I hope when they go back to school they can live together.

lovekevinjonasb November 4 2013, 16:20:25 UTC

How couldn't they be happy with a son law like Nick :D

anonymous November 4 2013, 12:50:29 UTC

You could use Rick you know? Maybe he wants Joe so bad and after what happened with nick he wouldn't mind using force to get to joe.. Idk.. I'd like that! ;) can't wait for next chapter :)

lovekevinjonasb November 4 2013, 16:21:03 UTC

Maybe ... ;P

anonymous November 5 2013, 23:41:35 UTC

Ohhh yes please! I like this idea!

anonymous November 4 2013, 12:51:53 UTC

I think this was just a filler chapter rigjt! I'm glad joes parents understood lol i guess i have to wait another month :/

lovekevinjonasb November 4 2013, 16:24:39 UTC

At some point I had to bring the parents into the game.
You know me so well ;) But I've got a little bit more free time so I really hope it won't take me so long again :/