perfectly (yewook)

Sep 29, 2009 15:57

title: perfectly
fandom: super junior. yesung & ryeowook.
warning: pg-15. traces of officeAU, comparing ryeowook to a jacket, lots of iffy writing. 865 words.
summary: jongwoon's jacket doesn't fit him like it's supposed to.

because what they have - it's special. )

writing breaks my keyboard

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chibi_roses September 29 2009, 21:15:28 UTC
I'm giving up minutes of potential sleep for this.

How can I not, it's yewook? And you're quickly becoming a favourite author.

In my little mind I have often compared people to clothes. Perhaps not in quite the same way, but close enough. I'm happy I'm not alone.

Where is this iffy writing you needlessly warned against? All I see is 865 words of beautiful writing, with lots of attention to detail (yesung thinking over his relationship, which is also beautiful, because yewook love is a beautiful thing)

Oh they're lovely. So are you. And yes, wook does not need that jacket on him (or much else, when yesung is around), although the gesture was sweet.

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loveisonthemenu September 29 2009, 21:30:38 UTC
no, never give up your beauty sleep. especially not for a fic. especially when it's mine. it's not worth it. EEK, I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU SAID THAT I'M BECOMING A FAVORITE AUTH** /happy scream shout

iffy just means i feel weird about it. which i do. :|

why are you so lovely? after you wake up from your beauty sleep, you're going to be a lovely queen and, and, yeah.

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chibi_roses September 30 2009, 16:42:24 UTC
It was alright, it took me a while to fall asleep so I wasn't missing much. And staying up that little bit later was totally worth it. Because it was your fic. Don't be too happy, I don't have high standards.

I kid, I kid. Be very happy.

Well you shouldn't.

It's because I'm just amazing :) If I'm going to be a lovely queen you can be in my royal court if you wish and write me fic when I demand

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loveisonthemenu September 30 2009, 19:53:51 UTC
i'm still happy. you can't squash down my happiness. C:

oh, fml. now i just read, "i kid, i kid." the surprise attack of the next line.

i can be your royal princess. C:

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thundersquall September 30 2009, 00:13:16 UTC
JFC I'M RUNNING FOR WORK WILL COMMENT PROPERLY LATER BUT FUCK, PUT THIS ON MIRACLE AND SHARE TEH AWESOME WITH THE WORLD RIGHT FUCKING NOW

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loveisonthemenu September 30 2009, 00:30:07 UTC
hurry to work! i don't want you to be late!

...no, sheena, i can't. i don't want the whole world to know about my ghey writing and eenie pulled me into some (of her) shit. so yeah, i'd rather keep my fics here, where it's all safe and sound. C:

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thundersquall September 30 2009, 01:44:34 UTC
:O What happened?

AND I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU TO STAY ONLINE, I FEEL ABANDONED NOW. D:

In any case, yes, I love this. I'm memming this for like, forever. You have absolutely no idea how lovely this is, do you?!

QUOTE TIME!

He's like a puzzle piece, that boy, and everything about him fits onto Jongwoon. Omg, this line alone, I died happy. This line is so perfect and sums up YeWook for me so wonderfully, you don't even know. They really fit perfectly against each other, omg I love this.

His aligns his body to Ryeowook's and he notices how they're already fitting together, because what they have is something special and something that's out of this world. Small typo? Should be 'He' in the first word, right? But I heart this so much. It's just, I'm conjuring up images of them wrapping around each other and just fitting so well together and Ryeowook tugged snugly into Yesung's chest, and I just - OMG, SO CUTE. ;____;

he's already wearing Ryeowook's heart on his sleeve and that's the only thing that he feels that he should wear. It's ( ... )

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loveisonthemenu September 30 2009, 08:03:42 UTC
/screaming and dying forever

we already talked on gchat about this, but you're too fuckin' sweet to me. i don't deserve you and i could repeat that a million times. i don't deserve anybody, really.

thank you for commenting, and reading, and noticing my typo, and ilysfm.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

you're so good to me and i can't believe you memmed it. /cries

i finally found a yewook icon C:

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call999 September 30 2009, 13:21:11 UTC
AAAAAWWWWWWWWWW this is so unbearably sweet, I love how symbolic the jacket is ;__;

And when the jacket falls off of Ryeowook's body and onto the floor, he doesn't think that it will ever, ever fit him as right as this relationship does.

So, so perfect ♥ Because Yewook is totally made for each other XD

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loveisonthemenu September 30 2009, 19:55:22 UTC
thank you for reading. like really, thanks so much. and you quoted it too. wow. C:

this is out of the blue but i was going to ask if i could friend you so i could read one of your locked fics. i must seem like a stalker or something. which i'm not, so don't worry!

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call999 October 1 2009, 11:05:21 UTC
This fic is so quotable, it's already in my memories ♥

I've added you bb 8D LMAO, there's nothing much to stalk.

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loveisonthemenu October 2 2009, 08:28:33 UTC
C: your comment makes me so happy, omfg.

ok, i added you back too. it was this one ryeowook fic i wanted to read, that's why.

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read0write September 30 2009, 17:40:25 UTC
aww so sweet
i like how perfect yesung and ryeowook are together, even yesung thinks so
ryeowook fits him so much better than any piece of clothing

i like this line: "Jongwoon walks out of his apartment without a jacket to wear, but he's already wearing Ryeowook's heart on his sleeve and that's the only thing that he feels that he should wear. It's perfect, it covers him, and you can't see it, but he feels it."
it's so sweet :D

yewook = love ♥

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loveisonthemenu September 30 2009, 19:56:33 UTC
thank you for the comment! C:

lol i always see "yewook = love ♥" and know it's you.

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tees2mai September 30 2009, 18:40:57 UTC
-After Jongwoon endures the long business meeting and it comes to a finish, Ryeowook walks into his office and Jongwoon sees him wearing the jacket that he gave him.

“You didn't feel like wearing a jacket today?” Ryeowook asks when Jongwoon lays him flat on his desk and their lips and bodies glide against each other.

“It didn't feel right,” Jongwoon tells him and in the back of his mind, there's that same thought that keeps on saying, It doesn't fit me as perfectly as you do.

And when the jacket falls off of Ryeowook's body and onto the floor, he doesn't think that it will ever, ever fit him as right as this relationship does. -

<333

i love yewook like this!

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loveisonthemenu September 30 2009, 19:57:18 UTC
thank you, you quoted a whole section. ♥

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