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lovegrapefruit

I'll Protect You

Oct 15, 2010 22:17

Title: I'll Protect You
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Romance
Author's Note: Just to be clear, I don't hate Indonesia or Indonesian Shawols, I'm just writing this fic inspired loosely by the event and I'm glad the boys aren't seriously hurt :)

It was just an ordinary day, well, for idols that is. The SHINee boys were busy all the time these ( Read more... )

rating: pg-15, pairing: onkey

Comments 19

rinni1905 October 16 2010, 02:37:13 UTC

Aw, this is really sweet. I've always loved to read your fic, and it seemed like that you know everytime what I wanted to read, I was thinking about Key's injury and BAM! Your fic appeared. It seemed that we were mind connected or something. I'm glad that you wrote this.

Your writing style is always amazing. And I was really touched by the ending. I think Jinki shouldn't blame himself anymore, because it was an accident, neither the fan or Key wanted it to happen. I'd already heard about the chaos in Indonesia, and I feel sorry for both SHINee and innocent fans who didn't do anything. I hope Jjong and Key would get well soon. Key is so pale lately.

Thanks a lot for writing this fic. I really love this.

lovegrapefruit October 17 2010, 03:07:26 UTC

Awww, thank you so much for the sweet comment <3

I still wonder what happened to Key's chest, because SM only said he had an 'ache in the left side of his chest'. I wonder if it's something serious like his heart or just a bruise... :(

By the way, are you Rinni from theia's blog? xD

rinni1905 October 17 2010, 10:53:08 UTC

Aw, yes! I am Rinni from Theia unnie's blog. I'm glad that you recognize me, keke.

"Ache in the left side of his chest"? Gah? That sounds terrible, luckily that there's nothing serious.

lovegrapefruit October 18 2010, 03:47:18 UTC

Hehe I love the blog <3 Actually, I'm one of the people who runs OnKeyNinja Youtube & OnKeyNinja Tumblr xD

yeah x.x I hope he's okay though...

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ext_287256 October 16 2010, 04:20:29 UTC

I'm a man, aren't i?
No! Key's a she for Onew! xp lol
oh my,i was wondering when will the fic about the accident that happened to the boys written and then this comes out~
uwoo,your description about the accident seems so real that i felt that that was the real story.. = =
great job bb^^ i heart it =D

lovegrapefruit October 17 2010, 03:07:55 UTC

haha Key is definitely Onew's WIFE xD
thanks a lot <3

omiichan October 16 2010, 09:35:10 UTC

uhhh~ loving these..
even with slight? angst..
the way they took care of each other.. total <3<3<3

lovegrapefruit October 17 2010, 03:08:54 UTC

heheh thanks so much! ^^

dubukaichan October 16 2010, 10:00:36 UTC

SPOT. I'll be back to comment later, I promise. ♥

dubukaichan October 18 2010, 08:53:37 UTC

I am back, as promised. ♥
Wah, this is so sweet. I love how Jinki is so caring towards his members, especially to Key. ♥ And I also like how Key doesn't want Jinki to get worried; but how can he not worry if it's his boyfriend who's hurt.

So sweet. ♥ And I love the last line. :D Thanks for sharing. Please write moaaaaar. :D
♥

lovegrapefruit October 18 2010, 21:49:41 UTC

yay! I'm glad you're back ^^
thank you for your sweet comment <333

asuka100492 October 16 2010, 12:27:50 UTC

spot :)
be back later, swear. :">

asuka100492 October 18 2010, 04:27:49 UTC

absjkjsnjjdns.. :">
this was so sweet!
it's almost like it was the real story OF COURSE IT WAS! WHAT AM I THINKING?!! this was awesome-ly written. the details were perfect. <3 and taemin was taking care of jonghyun OKAY FAR FLUNG COMMENT BUT I'M A HYUNMIN FAN SO HECK THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS.. <3333

lovegrapefruit October 18 2010, 21:50:15 UTC

LMAO I wish it was real too xD thanks a lot and haha I'm glad you saw some hyunmin in there xD