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lovegrapefruit

Legal

Nov 27, 2010 17:09

Title: Legal
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Romance

Today was September 23rd and it was Kim Kibum's nineteenth birthday. He spent the whole day with his lovely members hanging out and relaxing. They even had a nice dinner together where they could forget dieting and just eat as much cake as they wished. Jonghyun gave him a cool pair of shoes, ( Read more... )

rating: pg-15, pairing: onkey

Comments 16

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lovegrapefruit November 28 2010, 01:07:08 UTC

hehe thank youuu <3

xnicholee November 28 2010, 02:12:29 UTC

awww~ Kibummie thought that he was in trouble...
But Jinki knew that Key could've not ment to say that if he was a lil tipsy... I'm happy that he asked him in case. ^^

lovegrapefruit November 29 2010, 04:58:20 UTC

hehe yeah ^^ thanks for reading~

boogie14 November 28 2010, 02:15:18 UTC

OMO! this was oh-so-sweet! C:
Pabo Jinki! of course you didn't ruin his b-day, you made it the best day of his life!

and lol, i love jealous and protective Jinki! C:

lovegrapefruit November 29 2010, 04:58:39 UTC

hehe I love jealous and protective Jinki too xD
thanks for reading <3

rinni1905 November 28 2010, 07:48:22 UTC

Aigoo, this is so sweet, and I love how considerable Jinki was when he decided to just making out with his Kibum instead of having sex, I think Jinki didn't want to take advantage of Kibum when the diva was a little drunk and totally vulnerable. Oh, Jinki, my ideal man. *Get bricked*

Now that Jinki had his hair cut, I feel so happy, keke, even though I don't have a grudge with his long hair, I prefer short hair on him, make him younger and manlier. When I read in the part that Jinki was shorten or so in this fic, I can't help squealing, sorry for my inner crazy fangirl size.

This fic is really good, and I just wish that I would have you to write constantly, because you are one of my most favourite author on LJ, and you probably don't know how happy I am when I see you posted a fic.

lovegrapefruit November 29 2010, 05:00:16 UTC

aya~~
your comment is really so nice <3
I'm really glad that you like my writing and even say I'm one of your favourite writers ToT

and yes! I don't even think I could write a sex scene anyway. I'd feel way too awkward haha! plus, I hope Jinki and Kibum wouldn't be the type to have sex so soon x.x

AND YESSS AGAIN! his hair cut is awesome *o* he looks so much better with it.

jhea76 November 28 2010, 07:50:51 UTC

Hello..
this was so sweet..:)
how I remember the epi on love pursuer where Key sits on lap of Onew..that was so sweet..:)

ahh I love your banner also..:)

lovegrapefruit November 29 2010, 05:00:31 UTC

hehe thank youuu <3