How Lilly Kane's Bathing Suit Changed Everything-lit_chick08

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Title: How Lilly Kane’s Bathing Suit Changed Everything
Author: lit_chick08Rating: NC-17 for sex

Comments

[giveitlove]

Oh, verrrry hot!

Quite liked it, even though I kept thinking Veronica was like, 14 and that disturbed me. BUT SHE WASN'T so I'm just being silly!

Very good stuff :D

[nekdlove]

Dude that was great. I almost wish that they'd somehow change the show and make it so that that really happened, that they whole "I don't know how I lost my virginity" from the fist episode was just denial since what would have only been a few weeks later Lilly had died.

You Rock!

[rindee]

I absolutely love this. It's such a wonderful 1st time scenario, sweet and hot, but you didn't gloss over the reality of V's losing her virginity. I really liked the evening, lights-out-in-the-pool setting, but the best part, for me, was the understanding Logan showed Veronica before all the fun started. I know the two are incredibly hot together, but I like to think their bond arises from their insights into each other - Logan gets the whole "Moms-an-alcoholic thing, and, though it's not part of this story, Veronica gets Aaron is an abusive father. You did a great job of showing the emotional component of their relationship, and it's genesis. Also, I love the way you got into the story - Wallace & Duncan at the pool at the Grand. It's really nice work.

[nathan4haley]

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wow that was beautiful...so fantastic!!! god if only that had hapenned on the show!!! amazingly HOT

[the_musical]

i don't know what it was but they way it ended with wallace and duncan at the neptune grand almost made me cry.

i like the way you wrote the whole flashback sequence. almost hazy.