For Old Times’ Sake - Anne

[ladyanne04]

Title: For Old Times’ Sake
Author: Anne
Rating: R
Word Count: 3,000
Pairing: L/V
Spoilers: Through 2.11 - Donut Run
Author’s Note: Written for the loveathons “You Must Remember This” challenge.

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Comments

[dreamoflove86]

Aw...That was really pretty. Beautifully written. And I love that she stayed (for once) at the end.

[ladyanne04]

Thank you ) Glad you enjoyed! And I'm a sucker for a slightly upbeating ending, I just couldn't have her leave.

[taken_with_you]

Awww. This was really sweet and tender. I definitely liked.

Favorite part: He rolled her to the side, their bodies joined as they rocked together towards something sweet and sad and not what she’d expected from Logan at all. When she came, it was like a slow wave that rippled across her, the tension of everything swallowed by the need between them as she felt him shudder within her.

*hand to breast, sighs* Quite lovely, thank you.

[ladyanne04]

Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it - I like sweet and tender between them every now and then.

[blue_icy_rose]

*sigh* Oh, I loved that. All the memories that you created of Lynn were just so real that it made them even more touching and bittersweet in this situation.

Lynn was dressed casually as she sat with a toddler who must be Logan in her arms. She seemed unaware of the camera, her attention focused solely on him. The love on her face was heartbreakingly beautiful and Veronica wondered what would cause a mother with that much love for her child to leave him.

Those lines especially were the ones that really got me because after hearing Logan's memories of her and then that picture, you do wonder why she would just leave him. And then it all leads up to them comforting each other and let me say I'm very glad that you didn't have Veronica regret it. Not to mention that she stayed! I just loved that ending because it ended with the hope that maybe things could get better but it didn't end with it being perfect between them and I think that's why I liked it so much. Wonderful job!

[ladyanne04]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending, they weren't really in a place where I felt they could be truly happy, but I wanted a little bit of hope in there. And glad you enjoyed the memories as well!

[havemy_heart]

This is beautiful. I loved that Veronica was able to comfort Logan by letting him tell stories about Lynn. And I'm elated that she didn't leave at the end. Thank you for writing something so sweet.

[ladyanne04]

Thank you very much - I very glad you enjoyed it!

[ravish_me]

That was a pleasure to read. Thank you.

[ladyanne04]

Glad you enjoyed it!