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Christmas Comfort

Dec 21, 2005 22:34

Title:Christmas Comfort
Author: jaded_icy_rose
Rating:NC-17
Word Count:2,000
Spoilers:Takes place after, Season Two: Episode 10, "One Angry Veronica"
Characters:Logan/Veronica and a surprise guest ^_^
Summary:Logan and Veronica are both ditched when it gets close to the Christmas season - so both find comfort in one another after lies end up hurting both of ( Read more... )

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wicked_bitter December 22 2005, 06:42:43 UTC

ouch! damn... that was good! Totally hot, and I love how Logan comforted Veronica. So sweet. Will there be more?

jaded_icy_rose December 22 2005, 15:27:03 UTC

Right now, I have to say no. Just because I have a Harry Potter fic that I'm working on diligently and I want to finish it - and if I start a new one, it'll never get done. But there's always a maybe in the future ^_^

And thanks!

blue_icy_rose December 22 2005, 09:13:21 UTC

I wonder....do you think it'd be too much to ask my mom for a Logan to do this with as my Christmas gift? Because it'd be nice.

No reason to be nervous. Believe me. You're good to go. Also?

Ha! Take that, Donut!

*coughs* Couldn't resist.

jaded_icy_rose December 22 2005, 15:28:12 UTC

Hmm...not at all. Ask you Mom! lol

And I told you Donut was on my bad list this year - he really angered me.

havemy_heart December 22 2005, 14:37:22 UTC

This was beautiful. And hot. And sweet. I was worried that Veronica would freak out when Duncan discovered them, but she did exactly what I wish she would do on the show. It was great that Logan was so protective of her. Even at the beginning, he asked if she was okay. I want a Logan for Christmas!

It seems like this could be continued. Will there be more?

jaded_icy_rose December 22 2005, 15:29:29 UTC

Thank you ^_^ and oh how I wish I could ask for a Logan for Christmas too! lol

Right now, unfortunately I have to say no on it being continued. But that's because I'm working on a Harry Potter fic that I want to finish, it's a Draco/Hermione so I want to give that 100% of my focus for a long fic...but there's always a maybe ^_^

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jaded_icy_rose December 22 2005, 19:03:47 UTC

Thank you ^_^

truemyth December 28 2005, 09:22:37 UTC

I loved your characterization of Duncan in this. I love the rage of him breaking the vase and his cluelessness.

I hope you don't mind some constructive crit, but I noticed you tend to reuse words a fair bit. You even used 'soft' twice in the same sentence. If you have a thesaurus on your word processor, I suggest you try it if you're ever stumped for a new word.

jaded_icy_rose January 5 2006, 10:53:35 UTC

>_< I'm horrible for just now replying to this.

First off, thanks for the compliment ^_^ I used to like Duncan then the whole "What are we going to do, Meg?" pissed me off, so not Donut is on my bad list. lol.

And I don't mind the constructive crit. at all, thank you very much. I try and use different words but then when I'm writing I just let it go. Maybe now that I've mentioned it to my beta and I'm aware of it, I can try and fix that little problem of mine. lol. Thanks again.