Fic: In Flagrante Delicto - Madame Librarian

[taken_with_you]

In Flagrante Delicto
by: Madame Librarian
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4063

A/N: Sorry I'm reposting...I went in to correct my misspelled name in the first post, only to realize that none of my italics came through once I saved my changes. *facepalm* So, yeah. I'm an idiot.  X-posted at veronicamarsfic and veronicalogan
Summary: Flagrante Delicto. Etymology

Comments

[strippedpink]

Er...and you called MY fic hot? Now I'm embarrassed you even read mine!

This was amazing. And amazingly smutty. Rawr!

[taken_with_you]

Dude, seriously. I concede to your superior naked-Logan skills. The fact of the matter is, I've never seen a naked boy. So I don't know about bigness/girth or whatever. I just have to bumble my way through those parts, LOL.

You, on the other hand, you dirty slut...

[nanc1324]

These was totally awesome! I loved that you brought Shelly's party in..

Well, I am an expert

[taken_with_you]

I went to *plennnnnty* of those parties in high school. I was on the fringe of the popular crowd, and therefore was occasionally allowed in *rolls eyes*. Regardless, I know plenty of sex occured, and probably in less innocuous places than *gasp* an actual bedroom. LOL.

Thanks, darlin'

[taken_with_you]

Right back atcha! Mind if I friend you?

[slowtuesdays]

This was quite well written...and, well, hot. There was only one sentence that I kind of had a problem with, though. It was: From the open doors that led out onto the second-floor balcony, a draft ghosted through the room, leaving both occupants with chillbumps. It was sounding great until you added the chillbumps part, I just thought that you should've just stuck with "chills". Anyway, but other than that, I. Loved. It.

[taken_with_you]

Thank you for the suggestion, I appreciate it.

Thanks, darlin

[taken_with_you]

I heart naughty Veronica! too, and I debated with Logan doing her right there, lol, but decided in the end he probably would have at least choked a little bit.