When I Was A Child (4/4) - sarah_p

Oct 29, 2006 01:52

Title: When I Was A Child (4/4)
Author: Sarah :)
Pairing/Characters: Logan/Veronica, Dick, Keith, Weevil
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through 2x22, Not Pictured, just to be safe, but nothing specific. This is futurefic!
Word Count: 5,217
Summary: Nothing stays the same forever. Logan and Veronica's daughter Mandy finds out just how true this is.
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lloydsgurl October 29 2006, 07:26:02 UTC
All I've got to say is: AWWWWWWWWWW

What a wonderful end to a crazy!enjoyable read.

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sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:39:08 UTC
Aww, hearing this totally makes my DAY. I was worried about the ending! A lot! And crazy!enjoyable makes me haaaaappy!

Thanks so much for reading! :)

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smellologist October 29 2006, 11:00:06 UTC
yey!!! this was really good, very cute!
liked seeing Weevil in the universe.
I think that you should write a fic for all of the new loveathon challenges in this universe or we will miss mandy *nodds head*
hope you still get entered into the epic challenge
XX

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sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:42:36 UTC
Hee! Yes, it was a long time coming, but it's finally up! Thanks for being so patient with me :). I thought it was weird that WEEVIL was the one character I knew I'd be fitting in the OMG!FINAL chapter, but he HAS been neglected in this universe, so it seemed fitting. Since I have NO Weevil voice so to speak, I'm glad he worked :).

I think that you should write a fic for all of the new loveathon challenges in this universe

Dude, don't give me IDEAS! I have this feeling that there is definitely more of the Mandy story left to be told, so...I think she'll return at some point :).

Thanks so much for reading this and following it to the end, DESPITE my lameness. You are full of awesome! :)

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wonderlandchick October 29 2006, 13:23:52 UTC
That was such a sweet ending. Logan putting Weevil that close to the top of the emergency list was great. My two favorite touches of humor were Mandy calling Weevil "Mr. Evil" and DIck getting the nurses number at the hospital. And Weevil and Logan are totally right: Buttercup is the best Powerpuff Girl!
This ending was worth my wait! *giggles*

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sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:46:10 UTC
You have no idea how good it is to hear this, because I was *really* worried about finishing this. Part of the reason it took me so long to post it...I just didn't KNOW if this was the right way to end it.

This ending was worth my wait!

THANK YOU. Because, again, there was this FEAR about the final part. Thanks so much for reading! :)

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sodapop_09er October 29 2006, 14:03:23 UTC
MUAH! I love it an den some yo.

WOW that was like..the greatest ending EVER...mm. toasty.

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sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:47:32 UTC
DUDE. SO not the greatest ending ever, but I will TAKE THE COMPLIMENT AND RUN WITH IT. BECAUSE I NOW LOVE YOU!

Thaaaaaank you for reading! Love!

:)

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insunshine October 29 2006, 14:10:14 UTC
This was really, really great, and I thought I just left you a comment telling you so, but I guess I'm wrong since it's not there, but yeah, GREAT.

I love the Dick bits as always, because he's SO spot on and hilarious, and yay, I'm just so glad you finished it.

Great, great stuff here.

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sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:51:36 UTC
Dude! *kicks LJ on your behalf* And this is FANTASTIC, because after setting all of this up, I wasn't sure if the "OMG!SOSWEET" ending was the way to go, but it's what felt right, so I went with the schmoop. BEAUSE I AM HOPELESS. But you LIKED it, and I'm giddy :).

And, seriously, I don't know what it is about him, but every DAY my Dick love grows. He wasn't even supposed to BE such a big part of this fic, but...I couldn't NOT have him here. I MIGHT BE BECOMING A DICK FANGIRL. AND I THINK I LOVE IT.

Thank you, SO MUCH, for this! Comments like this totally make finishing worthwhile :).

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insunshine October 29 2006, 19:31:16 UTC
Yeah, LJ has been not nice to me lately.

::grumbles::

But yeah, I can't say enough about how great you are, and how awesome this is, which leads me to wonder why we're not friends on LJ, as you're friends with most of my friends, I believe.

Anyway, yes. I don't know if you know this, but I am not a Weevil fan like, at all, and you made me feel for him. It's a talent not many people have.

Great job, again!

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sarah_p October 29 2006, 19:45:10 UTC
Okay, dude, LJ just DELETED MY COMMENT TO YOU, so I get it. WTF????

But, you're right--we're NOT friends, and I think we should be. I'll fix that right now!

And I didn't know you weren't a Weevil fan! Amusingly, I've never really written Weevil, so this was all new territory for me. Which of course makes this comment EVEN BETTER, because I was afraid people would call me on the suck. Because, umm, I have no Weevil voice. Heh.

Thank you, again, and! Friends! :)

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