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Jun 16, 2006 23:16

Title: Nails For Breakfast, Tacks for Snacks (2/4)
Author: Marianna
Pairing/Character: Logan, Veronica, Wallace. Jane, Keith, Alicia mentions.
Word Count: 2840
Rating: PG-13, for the F word.
Summary: Part two of the story which was written for the loveathons Summer Epic Story Challenge. Obscene amounts of pop culture references again, and of course the ( Read more... )

challenge - epic smut summer 2006, all fiction posts, member - chopsticknoodle

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afrocurl June 17 2006, 04:18:01 UTC
I got a shot out! I was confused as to what chapter you were talking about from the last story, but now it makes total sense.

I was totally confused by the end until I realized that this entire thing was a flashback. Gee--I feel stupid tonight.

Logan is clearly the girl in this relationship--darning socks (how much of a 50s housewife does he want to be.) Next thing Logan's going to want to learn how to cook meatloaf and mend V's clothes.

I seriously had a weird moment when I saw "medical school" and wondered if you'd read that fic where L applied (and then I went to check that it was the first chapter--clearly tonight I'm being oh so smart.)

I love that Logan has three copies of DPS!!! "Oh Captain, My Captain!" needs to be Logan's mantra to RSL.

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insunshine June 17 2006, 04:56:50 UTC
SERIOUSLY.

By the way, all the RSL stuff? TOTALLY me. Because I have a rather large obsession with that man.

I'm so glad you liked it, even though it was confusing. It wasn't meant to be, but maybe I should write, y'know, flashback or prequel or something, somewhere.

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afrocurl June 17 2006, 04:58:34 UTC
I remember the conversation about RSL from the other day.

Easy way to fix the flashback issue--put a date at the beginning, like ::five months before::

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insunshine June 17 2006, 05:13:25 UTC
I totally just did that! And then I went back to the first chapter, and I put a date on it too, so now people REALLY can't be confused.

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rowanceleste June 17 2006, 04:42:11 UTC
Hee..it did take a second for me because I was expecting a follow up chapter rather than a flashback or pre-quel but know we know that he's got a good relationship with Wallace and really having something in his life other than Veronica was Wallace's idea...not that it's a bad idea...just handled badly in typical Logan fashion LOL..can't wait for Chapter 3..

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insunshine June 17 2006, 04:54:39 UTC
I'm glad you liked it.

I think I probably should've put prequel or something, but I didn't want to ruin the surprise.

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andrielle June 17 2006, 04:44:35 UTC
This was amazing. I love that we got a flashbackexplaining how they got to where they were in your first chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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insunshine June 17 2006, 04:53:41 UTC
Thanks!

I'm glad you liked it!

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havemy_heart June 17 2006, 05:00:58 UTC
I was *really* confused until the end, when I realized it was a flashback to how he decided to apply to medical school. Oh Logan. That's not exactly a hobby, sweetie.

And I have to say, your obsession with Robert Sean Leonard is a leetle scary ;-)

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insunshine June 17 2006, 05:09:20 UTC
Haha, I'm sorry. I just love him to distraction. It's fun, really. It also helps that he lives in a seperate state far across the country from me that I'm not a stalker.

JK. At least, I'm attempting to just be kidding.

I was tempted to put a disclaimer on it being like, THIS IS THE BACKSTORY, but I kind of didn't want to ruin it.

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popaddict June 17 2006, 05:22:33 UTC
I loved this look into how exactly Logan decided med school would be a good hobby.
It was really funny to see a 'pussy whipped' Logan as Wallace calls him, plus its always good to read Wallace/Logan interations.

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