Comments | love_stripes: Through Their Eyes

love_stripes

Through Their Eyes

Nov 03, 2009 00:10

( Now you have no options. )

length: chaptered (ongoing), fanfiction, rating: r, genre: angst

Comments 14

baboboy November 3 2009, 05:52:10 UTC

yes update :D

baboboy November 3 2009, 06:05:09 UTC

wow the atmosphere is really heavy and dark but I still love this fic and I'm always excited to see new updates :D so the japanese dude is free?

love_stripes November 4 2009, 19:13:09 UTC

this fic was designed to be very dark. the japanese guy's fate will be explained briefly later... however as i had guessed only five people commented this time. is this worth continuing?

baboboy November 4 2009, 23:52:25 UTC

of course it is worthy D: you have a really original story here, maybe it's complicated for the people who just wants to read a happy yoosu having sex 24/7. What I see here is something here and that is quality, that's why I love your stories~ please PLEASE continue this D:

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love_stripes November 4 2009, 19:14:20 UTC

i'm glad you're not bothered by the pace. indeed, it seems junsu may become a spy, whether he'd be good at it or not. however as i had predicted only five people commented this time. is this worth continuing?

sheilapiglet November 3 2009, 07:07:32 UTC

wow, so I guess that one Japanese guy got lucky...tho it's kind've troubling to know that the people in the cell would voluntarily turn him over...shouldn't they be sticking together right now and looking out for each other?...it's not like they gain anything from being mean...anyways, I'm assuming that the plot will start to pick up in the next chapter..perhaps Yoosu will finally meet face to face?..hehe..update soon!=)

love_stripes November 4 2009, 19:15:52 UTC

the other's turned over the japanese guy because they were worried that if they didn't there would be consequences for them. the plot will pick up, but as i had expected only five people commented this time. is this worth continuing?

awshin November 3 2009, 14:53:29 UTC

No options indeed. Sounds dark for yoosu. =/ Lol.

love_stripes November 4 2009, 19:16:46 UTC

this fic was designed to be dark, so i'm glad that seems to have been communicated well. however as i had expected only five people commented this time. is this worth coninuing?

awshin November 5 2009, 03:23:57 UTC

I can sense that you're disappointed because you definitely put in effort to write this. What do you think? Is this worth continuing? Why is this worth continuing? Why is this not worth continuing? My question is to make you think so you don't have to answer me = )

The answer lies in you, the decision is up to you. I'd prefer you to think rather than me giving you an answer. Do you want to finish this story or just leave it? = )

On another note, I believe as your story progress, you shoud be able to gain readers. Isn't that the norm? Lol.

padmik November 3 2009, 21:14:38 UTC

oh god, i always wondered what NK cities were like and just like Junsu, I couldn't picture it myself. It's jus hard to imagine how life is like over there to me.

Well... at least the Japanese guy is free? I hope he's free o.o

love_stripes November 4 2009, 19:17:55 UTC

it has certainly been difficult trying to write about a place i know very little about, but i'm trying. the japanese guy's fate will be explained very briefly later. however, as i had expected, only five people commented this time. is this worth continuing?

padmik November 4 2009, 22:09:10 UTC

I think it's worth continuing. A lot of people on LJ are silent readers. I do it every so often only because I'm in a hurry but most of the time I do comment.

I think you should continue :)