Something completely different!

[love_n_lost]

I've wanted to do this story forever, and now I finally got the inspiration to do it. It will be a long epic story, but for now I wanted to do an intro, and what better way to do an intro to a story then with a sex scene! Dani helped me write this one

Comments

[anonymous]

This story is the visual and literary equivalent of barbed-wire sodomy. I award you no points, and may god have mercy on your soul.

[arachnidwoman29]

If your so christian why are you reading this. Oh snap hypocrite!

[love_n_lost]

thanks love, thats sweet of you. apparently you are the only one who liked it. what the hell? is it really that bad of a story? I just got majorly flamed!

[love_n_lost]

thank you love. just ugh it didn't make me feel good, Im just wondering if it was that awful... they made me feel like crap.

[nanabanana75]

my eyeballs are still burning as i am running far far away from this pathetic mary sue story.

[love_n_lost]

then keep your comments to yourself and dont read it

[sparrowsxxswann]

dont listen to them reviewers...it takes a lot of balls to put a story that your nervous about doing on the internet for everyone to see.....they cant even use their propper names to propperly face you. They are nothing but pathetic cowards that need to get a life, i for one liked your story...okay she did seem a little mary-sue but not a big deal that i would flame you. It's hard to put a new character's opinion across in any story, and you have had a try at it....dont let pathetic individuals put you off though. I think you need to proof-read your work and maybe work a little more on it...but not all fanfictions are perfect. I look forward to reading the next part to this story and dont let them put you down. x x x

[love_n_lost]

aww well thank you very much, and I really appreciate you being constructive and actually helping me instead of flaming. :)

[anonymous]

i liked the story, very hot. i love jack sparrow.