Comments | love_deeper: [Challenge Fic] And Other Stories, Chapter 1, Akira/Tokito, PG-13

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[Challenge Fic] And Other Stories, Chapter 1, Akira/Tokito, PG-13

Jun 10, 2006 22:38

With great joy (and more than a little bit of OMFG IT'S DONE relief), I present to you the second entry for the Challenge of the End. Now, the rest of you, hurry up, ya hear?

Title: And Other Stories, Chapter One: Into the Horizon
Author: xskadi
Rating: PG-13 for Tokito's foul mouth
Pairing: Akira/Tokito, with rather half-hearted hints of Akira/Yuya
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pairing:akiraxtokito, challenge, fic, !samurai deeper kyo, fic:m/f

Comments 9

stormbringer246 June 11 2006, 02:56:40 UTC

Awww, I LOVE it! It is just so funny the way you did Tokito's snark and showed how they could now finish each other's sentances.

artillie June 11 2006, 15:21:36 UTC

I didn't even notice the finishing-sentences thing. >_> They must have run away on me.

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artillie June 11 2006, 23:22:57 UTC

The river part I tried to have Aka-chan rip apart, because I didn't think that it was good for me to be so enamoured of something I wrote^^ She didn't bite, though.

Thank you for reading!

ekachi July 4 2006, 05:14:12 UTC

"Hey, Tokito?" he whispered later that night, when all their sins were washed away and they were safe under the covers of their borrowed bed. "I love you. Or something."

She responded with a violent jerk on the blanket and, "Shut the hell up and go to sleep already. I got the message."this, I already praised! But I still want to die die die from its goodness ( ... )

artillie July 4 2006, 15:24:17 UTC

Hey! How many times have I told you not to let me discourage you? Write whatever the hell you want.

Subtle? O_o I felt like I was hitting the reader over the head with a shovel. The edited version is a lot better, anyway.

(You should probably wait until you get past the Soul Society arc before you write IchiRuki...)

ekachi July 5 2006, 05:01:51 UTC

er... I try not to let you discourage me, but it's hard, xskadi...

It was subtle! Subtle! It was obvious, but so subtle... at least on their minds, I think.

(ahh, I read everything that's out in two nights, so I signed up for it after I went through the soul society arc! Ichigo and Bakuya and Renji are teh sex. and I've never found a more likeable female character than Rukia!)

:( Gmail doesn't work at the moment for me! GARRRG! but I wrote 2 fics that I'd like to have you look at, if you ain't got much to do. And ooh, ooh... how's *your* mount-of-fics going? :P

artillie July 5 2006, 21:36:58 UTC

I get what you're saying.

(Whoa. That's quite a bender you went on there. *should probably get caught up* Rukia is love--when I first saw her, I thought, OMFG! she has Yukimura hair! And then my love was reaffirmed when she was learning how to speak like a normal person--but I like Yoruichi and Nanao better.)

Gmail is wonderful, but it's so buggy sometimes. >_<

I'll be busy next week, but that's only in the mornings. My mountain-of-fics is proving difficult to control (there's so much I want to write!), but I'm focussing on only two things at the moment, so it's not too bad.

blue_hobbit July 5 2006, 06:09:41 UTC

I think you may have just converted me to this pairing ^_^ I love Tokito's snark (imitating Akira's lecturing *g*)! And the way you went back and forth between he letters to Yuya and the storyline really gives an interesting flow to the story.
What a great read... I hope there will be more? :)

artillie July 5 2006, 20:53:03 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. (I looove writing snark. And letters.)

Yes, there will be more of this story, but the second chapter is kicking my ass at the moment--Kyo/Yuya is hard to write--and Akira and Tokito won't get much more screentime until the fourth and sixth chapters, anyway, if that's what you meant.