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lilfirefly November 28 2005, 03:56:37 UTC
*sniff* *sniff* So....cute....

Oh, it's a great fic, but I have no clue who Jay Chou is. ~.~; *hugs* Feel better, kay? <--just read your lj post from the...past few days...and can't reply because NOW she has to go to bed, and my God! This is a long side note....

^ ^- This is happiness~

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dorkodile November 28 2005, 08:36:57 UTC
Some Chinese R&B singer. Nice songs...raps, I mean. But with a painful disability to articulate his lyrics properly. XDDDD

Sweet dreams! Dream of Hotaru and Kyo!

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lilfirefly November 28 2005, 13:53:30 UTC
lol...I can try....Only two more weeks of school! O.o;

Good luck with everything. *patpat* You can do it~

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hiro_chan November 28 2005, 04:54:17 UTC
*dies*

This fic just killed me. In a very good way. Seriously.

Marvelously done, it just... absolutely well done. Absolutely. Many of the lines were very well thoughts, kyo and hotaru are all so in characters, and I just fall hard for the twisted relationship you just have there.

And a great way of involving yuya without making her like an annoying outsider to the relationship.

The last two paragraph somehow made my heart ached.

Thank you for keeping me back to the KyoHota-ness in always the right time when my thoughts started to stray from them. This kind of fic made me feel like a criminal for not writing more of them.

This fic, GOD, just so awesome. I'm babbling, I know, but I hope you know just how much I worship you and your fics.

*starts building a smaller shrine for you next to the KyoHota shrine :D*

Would it be too much if I beg "Write More PLEEEAASSEE??" ;)

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dorkodile November 28 2005, 08:35:44 UTC
No, it definitely will not be too much. XD My exams end tomorrow and I'll be writing like mad after that. There are just so many plot bunnies in my brain, dying to break free. XD

I had this idea on the bus home last night. Just thinking about the dynamics of the relationship between the two. We can't hardly deny the fact that Kyo does care of Yuya, a lot. To do that will be, in some way, put Kyo OOC. Because we deny a part of him that SHOULD be there. But that doesn't mean I'm suddenly going to ship Kyo/Yuya. >D So what IS his relationship with Hotaru?

Ah well...this is what happens when you spent the past one week with Dracula, Frankenstein, and Hyde and Dorian Gray. *stares at the pile of books on her desk* Be gone, foul creature! XD

And write more KyoHota, you!!!

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hiro_chan November 28 2005, 08:43:01 UTC
And you wrote all of those just in one night?? *gapes*..

And write more KyoHota, you!!!

oh, you have no idea how much I'd LOVE to. Thing is, I have a HUGE writerblocks for anything KyoHota which damn frustates me >XB.. I have a couple of KyoHota fics just waiting to be finished, but somehow I couldn't find a way to finish them properly *sighs*..

So yes, feed me with your ficcies :D! Who knows I'll then find a way to take down this annoying writer's block :)~!

spent the past one week with Dracula, Frankenstein, and Hyde and Dorian Gray

Ah, that kind of explains your writing style then :). I really love your writing style :D:D!

And I have to say again that the last 2 paragraphs really got to me. And imagining Kyo kissing Yuya while staring at Hotaru... *siiighs*. It was as though all of Kyo's tenderness which usually was aimed towards yuya would finally also be aimed towards Hotaru :):)...

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dorkodile November 28 2005, 08:58:09 UTC
Nah, I wrote the first part last night. Then got too tired AND too depressed with it to write the next. This part was finished this morning, listening to Chinese R&B raps and Christmas songs. XD

The last paragraph was a last minute add on thing. I have no idea how to resolve this Kyo/Yuya/Hotaru triangle that I managed to get myself into...

GO WATCH FLUFFY MOVIES TO GET RID OF THE WRITER'S BLOCK!! Or read gay books...hell, Wilde rocks~! XD

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stormbringer246 November 28 2005, 13:39:29 UTC
"But he knew that Kyo loves Yuya. In his own twisted, Kyo way, he loved her."
"Hotaru looked up from the book that he was not reading. "

Those lines were great! I loved this! Please write more stuff!

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