Her eyes that were so expressive and devastatingly beautiful. Without them, she was just a pretty girl in the crowd, but those eyes made him feel like he could almost see her future. Fire, passion, anger and wit, all facets of her personality. He could vaguely see where they may lead her, where her path may cross with his.
omg! gave me chills!
i cannot wait for you to update. please do it soon!
Totally wasn't what I was expecting (setting it in 2004, i thought I was in for a less brazen read) and I loved it! Nice reveal with Blair...I actually didn't see it coming. More!
yeah, well i figure Chuck would have liked to pretend he was a stud even if he hadn't actually done anything yet. He is a 13 year old boy after all! Thanks for reviewing.
In his head he was trying to decide what it was that intrigued him. It wasn’t her body; he was used to slender girls. Her face was exceedingly pretty, but he was used to pretty girls as well.
‘It’s the eyes.’
Her eyes that were so expressive and devastatingly beautiful. Without them, she was just a pretty girl in the crowd, but those eyes made him feel like he could almost see her future. Fire, passion, anger and wit, all facets of her personality. He could vaguely see where they may lead her, where her path may cross with his.
She looked at him with those eyes and he got it. Perhaps Nate wasn’t such a fool after all. One thing was for sure; the girl had potential.
That was amazing, really good, I love it! Off to read chapter two now (:
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Loves it! Can't wait for the next chappy :)
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Her eyes that were so expressive and devastatingly beautiful. Without them, she was just a pretty girl in the crowd, but those eyes made him feel like he could almost see her future. Fire, passion, anger and wit, all facets of her personality. He could vaguely see where they may lead her, where her path may cross with his.
omg! gave me chills!
i cannot wait for you to update. please do it soon!
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‘It’s the eyes.’
Her eyes that were so expressive and devastatingly beautiful. Without them, she was just a pretty girl in the crowd, but those eyes made him feel like he could almost see her future. Fire, passion, anger and wit, all facets of her personality. He could vaguely see where they may lead her, where her path may cross with his.
She looked at him with those eyes and he got it. Perhaps Nate wasn’t such a fool after all. One thing was for sure; the girl had potential.
That was amazing, really good, I love it! Off to read chapter two now (:
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