fic: First Wives Club

[lovablelexie]

Title: First Wives Club
Author: lovablelexie
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Lea/Dianna/Naya/Heather
Summary: Lea, Dianna, Naya, and Heather hang out. Drinks and other activities ensue.
Disclaimer: This is a total piece of fiction, I own nothing and no one involved
Word Count: 4,925
A/N: Okay, I've been working on this one for way too long but it's finally

Comments

[lovablelexie]

So glad you liked it!! I was on a roll with it this weekend and I'm glad I finally finished it. And yeah...I had to have all of them on Dianna, I mean come on, who can resist her?

[sannn87]

oh hot dayum!!!!! that was probably not the right thing to read at work with the boss across the room..... but i just couldn't help it :P this was soooo awesome!!!!! and HOT!!!! nice use of first person and great choice making it dianna's. everything was hot and sexy and awesome and i loved every word of it and please write more soon!!!!!

le sigh.... now back to work :(

[lovablelexie]

Wow, I hope you can function at work after that!!

I'm glad you liked the first person, it was definitely a challenge for me. And I always feel like I can relate to Dianna so it just seemed natural to write it from her perspective.

Thanks for reading, you're the best!

[sannn87]

working is definitely proving to be difficult task today :P but i'm also very sleepy so that might be part of the reason lol.

i actually find writing first person therapeutic. it's more personal for me and i only focus on one person's feelings and thoughts.

also, thanks for the compliment, but i have to disagree and say that you are in fact the best :D i LOVE reading your stuff and it's actually quite awesome that you always reply to my comments so YAY!!

what will you be working on next??

[lovablelexie]

Work, porn, and being sleepy? Yep, that's how I feel most days! ;)

I quite enjoyed writing in the first person and to be honest, it's kind of throwing me off with this new fic which is back to my usual third person.

And I think after someone takes the time to comment, the least I can do is comment back to let people know how much I appreciate them. Because really, without the comments and knowing people do read your stuff and like it, what's the point really? Except for the fact that I have all these ideas in my head I need to get out.

My next fic is something a little different as well. It's a Dianna/Rachel/Quinn fic but Dianna's part in it is pretty heartbreaking, if I do say so myself.

[lonelyrainbow86]

omg and now i have to go to work. that was soooo good!!! wow amazing!!

[brettt_ashley]

JESS YOU FAILED TO MENTION THAT "OTHER ACTIVITIES" ALSO MEANT SMOKING... high!gron is my weakness. I don't really know why, but I love fics when Dianna (or Quinn) is stoned. So fucking hot. Okay time for real thoughts lol. I'm so glad you wrote this in first person. It gave it a totally different feel from your other writing. But I loved it, because you capture Dianna so well. Plus, it made the whole four girls at once thing easier to follow lol. I hate when you're reading a fic and you have to stop and think, "which girl is that "her" referring to?" But that never happens when I read your stuff

[lovablelexie]

Haha, well the smoking was more or less prompted to me so I kind of threw it in there. I've never smoked in my life so I was worried about how that would come across...

Now that's it finished, I'm really glad I wrote it in the first person too. It's kind of throwing me off with the current fic I'm writing but oh well.

And can I just say how much I missed your reviews? Seriously I read every sentence so slowly and multiple times as if to savor it...kind of like when I read porn, lol!

[brettt_ashley]

I was going to ask if you'd ever smoked... I hear it can make for some enjoyable times ;)

Haha yeah, that would throw me off too. Verb tenses and POV are the two things that I'm worst at when I'm writing :/

I'm missed reviewing your writing!!! I've been like fic-celibate this summer and its been horrible. Ohh you just compared my reviews to porn. Haha I love it!! Off to go catch up on your other stuff, I'm so excited to have some free time to finish up reviews... they always take so long because I just end up re-reading the update like 12 times lol.

[lovablelexie]

There are many things I never tried in high school/college that I wish I had..that is one of them. Maybe eventually...

And I totally compared your reviews to porn, that's how much I love them/look forward to them!! And seriously, you keep re-reading? That makes me so happy! The only fics I ever re-read are stuff by flipfop555 and pleasurechest and those girls are amazing!

fic recommendation...

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