Comments | louisj: Slay me, Save me Chapter 13: Into the jaws of death; into the mouth of hell (part 1)

louisj

Slay me, Save me Chapter 13: Into the jaws of death; into the mouth of hell (part 1)

May 29, 2008 13:50

Title:  Slay me, Save me
Chapter 13: Into the jaws of death; into the mouth of hell
Pairing: Spike, Adam, Angel, Giles & the Sunnydale gang
Rating:  NC17 for Spike swearing and torture, mutilation
Summary:  Spike and Tara infiltrate Wolfram and Hart and Lindsey gets his just rewards with Lilah pulling everyone's strings.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of ( Read more... )

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roxyr1 May 29 2008, 13:02:11 UTC

New chapter!! New chapter!! Squeeeeee!!

And Tara seems to have a leading role. I'm in heaven. Will print it off to enjoy tonight.

Rox
xx

louisj May 29 2008, 13:04:19 UTC

Now that was quick, sweetie. And while you're squeeing...wait for it...I'll be posting chapter 2 later today.

roxyr1 May 29 2008, 13:09:33 UTC

Now that news screams out for a

SQEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

louisj May 29 2008, 13:11:16 UTC

My ears, oh god, my ears!

cherron1 May 29 2008, 13:07:23 UTC

Rox called me to let me know you'd posted. (does she sit staring at her email alerts?) LOL

Started to read, but boss has just plonked a pile of work on my desk. Moan. EEEEE (no squeeing for this Newcastl gal)I'm a Spara fan too.

louisj May 29 2008, 13:16:51 UTC

EEE by 'eck, you're canny lass. What? Your boss makes you work?

cherron1 May 29 2008, 13:19:04 UTC

Yeah, my icon is how I look whenever he dares to believe I'm paid to do his work. Hee hee.

cherron1 May 29 2008, 15:46:49 UTC

A thrilling chapter, hon. Like Team Spara and Spike's admiration of her. Ooh, have waited for Lindsey's comuppance and our vampire didn't hold back, even if reading his suffering was pretty stomach churning. Spike to the rescue and you wrote that whole scene fantastically well. Who'd a thunk our boy would take such care of Tara. Hopefully you'll develope the relationship, 'cause it's too good to overlook.

The last line 'Sighing, he returned to his empty house, made a sandwich, gathered a stack of books and prepared to wait for their return.' made me sad for Giles as although the vampire-watcher bonding has been great, I though you were going to have them get up to some naughties. Poor Giles, but, hey, I'm sure you've got loads more in you and part two this afternoon...

louisj May 29 2008, 15:53:20 UTC

Thanks, sweetie. I quite like Team Spara and may even throw that name into future fic.

louisj May 29 2008, 22:37:00 UTC

Oh and thanks for the pics. Can you put 'LouisJ' on the top right hand corner of each?

roxyr1 May 29 2008, 21:06:21 UTC

Love: Spike and Tara on a mission; their obvious affection for each other which I hope you explore further.
Love: Spike getting even with his old nemesis. I've waited since 'Best dressed kill' to see this.
Love: Lilah making another appearance and as evil as I always want her to be.
Love: The Avengers reference. You know I'm a Tara King / Linda Thorsen fan.
Love: Giles' resignation to his boy and Adam taking off to let off steam.

Loved this chapter and will comment on part 2.

xx

louisj May 29 2008, 22:33:58 UTC

Fellin' the love, sweetie.

thanks