Tug

[lotusk]

Title: Tug
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Length: ~8.7k, Total: ~13.4k
Summary: Kyungsoo is a no-nonsense college student who lives a quiet, ordinary life filled with studying, assignments and exams. But on Tuesdays and Thursdays, he has Creative Writing classes and he gets to spend time with tall, gorgeous Jongin. One Thursday, Jongin

Comments

[mutantbic]

Help me out here I think I'm hyperventilating hahaa.

Kyungsoo is not alone I wanting to yank on Nini's hair...

Everything about this is YES.💖

[lotusk]

Thank you!!!!

[bluedreaming]

This was absolutely gorgeous Adele AND NOT TRASH AT ALL and the way you made them go slow and worked the hair into everything and it was all kinds of beautiful. You don't write "plots" as you call it, you write wonderfully poignant moments of connection between people, and if that's not good enough then I don't think anything else is either.

*Huffs in your general direction*

[lotusk]

You always say the loveliest things abt my writing catbear - especially when I'm not feeling too confident abt things. Bless you for being such a dear friend and I love you lots!

[rjaejoo]

Ok this is just so freaking adorable.  Ahh...it brings back memories of falling for someone and the tentative getting to know each other and then that something more happening.  Great story and thanks for sharing this!

[lotusk]

Crushes can be so awkward and embarrassing and I hope I captured some of that here. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[sammylovesblue]

OH MY GOODNESS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS SINCE FOREVER I THOUGHT YOU'LL NEVER GET TO FINISH IT AND ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT IT'S WORTH THE WAIT

[lotusk]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

[amaxingbaek]

NO DAMN IT, MY INTERNET CRASHED AND I LOST MY COMMENT. Ugh, good thing I write it on another doc, but T.T Anyways! I'm about 98% positive that this is going to end up needing two boxes for the entire comment. I apologize in advance if this is incoherent...because it is and I don't think it's what you're really looking for in a comment, but I'm going with it anyways.

I’m about 98% positive this comment is going to take up two comments, but that’s...not bad right? I just have a lot to flail and spazz about and I’m sorry in advance for the lack of coherency that this comment will have OTL.

As far as Kyungsoo was concerned, he firmly belonged in the pure nerd category with his glasses and boring haircut and nondescript clothing.
HELL YEAH, NERDS UNITE. I hate the stereotypes that come with looking a certain way, but eh, I’m a nerd. I look like one and I act like one so lol. Kyungsoo and I are spirit animals...although I don’t like math and numbers like he does. Maybe only nerdy spirit animals? I don’t even know.

trying not to feel

[amaxingbaek]

There was no mistaking the small, low moan Jongin made as Kyungsoo pulled gently on the hair twined around his fingers.
!!!! Important opening sentence!!

"I saw what you did there, Kyungsoo. Smooth." Chanyeol gave him a thumbs up as he walked past in his signature ripped, black jeans.
Lmfao Chanyeol! BUT AGAIN, BLACK RIPPED JEANS. ARE YOU TRYING TO HURT ME? I know he's Goth, but like !!!! Arg.

"That thing you did with Kai's hair. Niiiice. Like foreplay, right?"
I snorted lol.

A few steps later, he was standing in front of Jongin, whose fingers were playing with the single chain that hung from his belt and draped across the black denim covering his left thigh.
FFFFFFF /MORE/ BLACK JEANS?!

The moonlight threaded through the ginkgo trees, casting tiny, fan-shaped shadows on the grass and the backs of their hands.Ahhh the descriptions you write are so beautiful that I always have to kind of stop and catch my breath. I don’t know what it is, but the little details like this, the things that people would normally gloss over, are so

[lotusk]

I'm so overwhelmed by these comments, seriously!! I never expected Kyungsoo to resonate with anyone so much and I'm just ... thanks for sharing all this with me, Michelle /hugs you lots. Also I love your comments a lot okay? They're always such a joy to read ;;;;;;

[amaxingbaek]

ORZ it was so long and T.T I didn't even realize I had copy-pasted that much until I hit the add a comment button and it was like "You have exceeded..."

People are such assholes lmao. Like just because my eyesight is bad does not give correlation to being smart and nerdy. I've never understood how glasses equates to nerd, but whatever xD

/jumps on you and purrs