Sugar

[lotusk]

Pairing: kaisoo (with side chanhun)
Length: ~16k
Genre: bakery!au, fluff, romance & a pinch of magic
Rating: PG13
Warning: one brief mention of nudity involving OCs
Summary: Kyungsoo is the cranky pâtisserie owner who refuses to eat sweet things and Jongin is the “gifted” pâtissier who’s determined to change his mind. Vibrant waiter Chanyeol is

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[amiyourprincess]

Sorry I had to hoard this spot. Lol.
I missed reading from you!
I missed Stained Glass.
I missed you!!!!
Will comeback to comment more coherently I SWEAR!!!!♥♥♥

BACK BACK BACK

[amiyourprincess]

HIIIII o///
I'm sorry I came back for... was it a day? Lol.

This made me miss KaiSoo as well!! I didn't realize I have't read of them for a while. And HNNNNGGGG, Jongin is so so soooo sweet and Kyungsoo is so cuuuuute /hears an indignant Soo saying he's not cute.
HAHAHA.

And there's a pinch of magic!!! That twist was really something. I didn't expect it to be really there, and I was still skeptical, but Jongin made me believe. Everyone needs magic!!! :)

I don't know most of the sweet delights here and I'm searching for them AND I JUST REALLY WANT TO EAT ALL OF THEM!!! Plus I love coffee. Coffee is like water to me nowadays. HAHA. I need to cut down on them but naaaaaah. Hahaha.

Thank you for thisss! And you might not remember me but that's fine!! But I really did miss you! ♥♥♥

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[lotusk]

/cries/ yes I remember you from way back :) thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed Sugar!

[amiyourprincess]

Ive seen the film too!! Tho I didnt know about the manga and anime. Hehe. Ever since I've seen it, I wanted to read a fic about it and I'm happy you wrote it!!!:) I love this coz here they got together. HAHAHA. It was vague in the movie.

And I'm happy you remember meee. YEY.

Oh. I've read some comments and... Did something happen? Hmmm, I want you to know that you're a good person okay?

[93rdfragment]

Let me just put a disclaimer here that I'm about to sleep and am most probably going to be incoherent. Lol.

ADEEEEEEELE You always make me want things after reading your stories. :)) You have such vivid descriptions that just gets to me. I need yummy desserts now. Preferably made by Jongin. And coffee preferably made by Kyungsoo. Yes. Yes. Those.

And I was just dumbly smiling while reading. This is such a feel good fic. Perfect for a bedtime story. :D AND THERE'S MAGIC. MAAAAAGIC. Everything is better with magic. Plus angry Kyungsoo and bemused Jongin. You can just see Jongin looking at a fuming Kyungsoo like the other has flowers and sparkles all around with choirs of angels singing. Lol.

I hope you're feeling better now! You're an amaaaaaazing writer. Don't let yourself think otherwise despite how things may seem to look like. :D *throws hearts*

[lotusk]

I am feeling better now thanks to comments from you and other readers. I was really starting to think I got everything wrong with this fic so thanks for the reassurance that I got at least some things right /cries/ it's only the second time I've written Magic into my fics and I hope it wasn't too hokey orz!!! As for the food - I'm so jealous of you bc you're in a much better position to find all their goodies than me sobs. The bakeries here are PATHETIC!!!!

[read0write]

kekekekekekekek heeheeheehee
OMG THE ADORABLE SWEETNESS OF IT ALL!!!!! JUST OMG SO MUCH SWEETNESS AND ADORABLE AND AWW KYUNGSOO BUT HE'S FINALLY MOVING PAST IT
AND I LOVE PATISSIER JONGIN
AND OMG WAITERS YIXING AND CHANYEOL AND SEHUN TOO CUTE
JUST YES :D

and now i must sleep because work but this was definitely a good read before bed
SO MUCH SWEET FLUFFINESS IT'S BEAUTIFUL! (and i'm only half craving some desserts now :P)

[read0write]

omg i forgot to mention but JONGIN WITH THE LITTLE MAGIC?!?!?!?! so cute and sweet :)

i am now more intrigued by antique bakery...but who knows? :3

[lotusk]

Thank you for the screaming - it gave me so much heart!! I'm glad you liked the Magic and also ... You must watch antique bakery. I've only seen the film though and it has some pretty dark elements - you'll see. Sugar is a much sanitized and much happier story than the one in the film. Can't comment on the anime and manga as I haven't seen either otl

[jeynebesterling]

ADELE CUTE KAISOO WITH A PINCH OF MAGIC GET THE HECK OUT OF TOWN I LOVE IT I LOVE IT. once that twist is revealed little things about jongin make more sense in a way and it just adds the nicest touch of magical realism to everything WHICH I AM A BIG FAN OF . SO A PLUS WOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO. kaisoo themselves its like tale as old as time keeps playing on repeat BARELY EVEN FRIENDS THEN SOMEBODY BENDS UNEXPECTEDLY. I love how organically their relationship progressed. I wish this was more coherent but I haven't slept in waaaaaaaaay too long >.<

[lotusk]

Thank you so much for your extremely coherent and heartwarming comment! Omg I love magical realism too and mention it a fair bit in my bookshop!au kitty sukai fic. I wanted the magic to color the narrative but not overwhelm it and I hope it worked! I've been feeling pretty down about this fic so this comment has made me start to believe in it again. Thank you! /hugs/ have we spoken on Twitter or aff with you using another name? I can't figure this u/n out I'm so sorry ;;;;

[thesockmonster]

*wails at you because this is still so sweet and perfect and FLUFFY*

I don't do fluffy, really, but ugh, I melted here. Your additions were fabulous and slid right in without a hitch. I love it. I'm also nursing a crazy sweet tooth now. <3

[lotusk]

Bunnyyyyyy /curls up in your lap. I'm sorry you had to brave all that fluff and it means the world to me and I love you okay? Thank you for reading this ;;;;;;;;