Comments | lotusflower85: L/M Fic

lotusflower85

L/M Fic

Nov 07, 2006 14:35

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ginchy November 7 2006, 13:32:19 UTC

*screeches happily*

*hugs my fic close*

*hugs JL*

I LOVE IT!!! Man what a day--I got your package, and this fic!! :D :D :D :D

Oh, it's so beautiful! I LOVE L/M on Tatooine fics! Did you know that?! :D And this one is so perfect--I love how quiet and reflective it is, with the love still pouring out all over. And poor Mara, I can so relate. I can't imagine what I'd look like on Tatooine--I burn red enough here on Earth! ;)

I just love how Luke thought to bring her moisturizer and after-sun lotion--and the idea of him rubbing it into her skin... *le sigh*

Thank you, thank you so much! I <3 it muchly!

*off to read again!!!*

Are you going to post this on TFN? *bats eyes* ;)

lotusflower85 November 8 2006, 23:52:17 UTC

*hugs back* So glad you like it! I love L/M Tatooine fics as well - Farmboy just seems so at home there, and Mara...doesn't, which is so fun to play with.

I might post it at TFN - if I can come up with a title!

Thanks, gal!

maramijade November 7 2006, 17:22:26 UTC

Positively wonderful.

I agree about the burning. ..

and of COURSE luke would know more about Tatooine's climate than Mara. . . silly mara you can't always be the one prepared for everything!!

lotusflower85 November 8 2006, 23:53:56 UTC

Thanks! For someone who is so intelligent and logical, Mara can be just as clueless as Luke sometimes. But that's one of the things I love about her character :)

jeditrace November 9 2006, 03:56:34 UTC

ACK! L/M mush! I love it! Absolutely love it!!

*melts*

I really like how you set it up, moving around the timeframe to show different scenes. The part about Mara's scars was chilling. And the romance was....*sigh*.....just perfect!

Brava, lady! *applause*

lotusflower85 November 14 2006, 09:05:01 UTC

Thank you! I thought the bit about Mara's scars was fitting - there would be no way her hands would be lily white and pristine - she's been through too much - and I really wanted to use the idea of a person's skin reflecting their life and personality.

riansage November 9 2006, 18:06:25 UTC

This was great! I loved how Luke knew so much about skin and had the forethought to take care of Mara. She's so stubborn that I could totally see her disregarding his warnings and getting fried. This story makes me wonder if your summer is approaching and thus fueled your muse.

lotusflower85 November 14 2006, 09:07:46 UTC

Thanks! Living in a really dry area myself, I know what it's like to be extra paranoid about sun protection and I imagine that Luke would be too. Summer is about to start for us, but we had a really dry winter so the barren-ness of my area at the moment gave me the inspiration for this.