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Oct 07, 2007 23:26

The Birthday Gift

Thin smoke slides dryly through the cool air, wafting into the small sitting room. A young boy sits on the wood floor at his parents’ feet, gingerly picking at the tape of a rectangular package. The silvery paper unfolds in the boy’s lap, as he pulls off the tape, careful not to tear an edge or corner. He lets it ( Read more... )

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puertoricanjane October 8 2007, 22:00:08 UTC
O MY SWEET BABY JESUS IN AN ORANGE PLAID BATHROBE DRINKING BOURBON THROUGH A COFFEE STIRRER ON SUNDAY MORNING, that icon just improved 5x10^89fold. Will read this later, when my brain is functioning--as you may have guessed, it ain't right now. By the way, if you want to post to the writing COMMUNITY you have to go through some extra processes so that people can read it: either go to the community page and at the top of your screen I think it says 'post to community' on the task bar, or when you go to post from your own journal, you get something next to your icon at the top of the page (above the box where you write shit) that looks like this:

Post as: lotuselise1928
Post to: and it gives you a drop down menu, where you can select the community/journal you want it to post to.

As is, only your current specified 'Friends' (i.e. me, Kate, and the Lord) will ever see this. Or was that your intention?

I need some beer, man.

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awsmpossum October 8 2007, 22:49:53 UTC
Props, kudos, and general praise. Color me impressed.
I love the way that the doll is the only one who is ever referred to by name, I love all the detail, specifically the use of color.

Very well done. :)

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