Comments | lotus79: FIC: Schisms, Lee/Kara, PG, Chapter Two

lotus79

FIC: Schisms, Lee/Kara, PG, Chapter Two

Jan 27, 2009 06:19

Title: Schisms, 2/?
Rating: PG, though it will probably go up later
Spoilers: Season 1, so far. Though this goes firmly AU before the mini.
Pairings: Kara/Lee, mentions of Kara/Zak
Summary: AU fic. What if Kara never served on the Galactica before the attacks? What if Lee made a mistake he couldn't fix? Maybe some things break for a reason. WIP.
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elzed January 26 2009, 21:52:57 UTC

Nice to see this continued - I rather like that she sent Lee to hell but couldn't turn down the old man...

And exactly how long will Bill take to figure out who's the daddy, eh?

lotus79 March 28 2009, 01:09:35 UTC

Yeah, I figured she couldn't deny the old man a thing. ;)

As for the second... my lips are sealed. :P

sunrider05 January 26 2009, 22:28:04 UTC

I'm glad to find this story again - interesting setup. Looking forward to reading more :-)

lotus79 March 28 2009, 01:11:07 UTC

Thanks!

shah_of_blah January 26 2009, 22:33:41 UTC

I'm enjoying this story so far. I particularly liked Kara's decision not to tell the Old Man about Seb. It's very much in keeping with her habit of sacrificing herself for the people she cares about (even if, like Lee, they've wronged her).

lotus79 March 28 2009, 01:12:25 UTC

Yes, that was exactly what I was going for. I'm glad it came through. Thanks! :)

cattm January 26 2009, 22:55:24 UTC

Good chapter. I like the way she can't say no to Adama, and that she won't tell him who the father is. Looking forward to the next part!

lotus79 March 28 2009, 01:14:48 UTC

She's got a guilt complex going there, indeed. Also, if she tells him now, she'll have to explain why she never told him five/six years ago, so she's a little caught up in the lie too.

rdave1 January 26 2009, 23:35:24 UTC

Hey you are caught up here too. Lee deserves anything Kara throws at him. Personally she should ignore him and not let him see Seb but I don't like it when our pilots fight. Should be interesting.

lotus79 March 28 2009, 01:16:28 UTC

Yeah, I know what you mean. It's difficult writing them so at odds with each other, but Kara's not letting him off easy. (Hey, this is Kara!) I'll have to balance out all the bad feeling in the present with some smut in flashback, I think. ;)

rdave1 March 28 2009, 01:18:20 UTC

Seb will get them together. You know he will idealize Lee even if Kara keeps him away from Lee. Then mom and dad will have to talk. He is a smart kid.

lotus79 March 28 2009, 01:28:39 UTC

LOL, I like this idea! He already worships the ground the Old Man walks on. ;)

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