LotS LAS: FINAL ROUND PROMPT!

[pristineungift]

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Questions, Concerns, etc.

[pristineungift]

Questions or concerns here. XD

Re: Questions, Concerns, etc.

[angstbunny]

So changing punctuation is okay, so I can do "I feel fine!" but do I have to use the whole sentence?

IE: "And I’ll do it and then everything will be fine."

Can I, say, break it up into "I'll do it." and "Everything will be fine." or do I have to use that whole sentence as it is?

That trolololol icon is pretty appropriate btw, because holy shit, this is crazypants. x_x

Re: Questions, Concerns, etc.

[pristineungift]

Yeeeeessssssssssssss. I used the icon for the post and the questions thread on purpose. XD I wanted to really challenge you two in the final round - make you stretch as writers. <3 I'm so excite!

Also I'm unscreening your comment, because it's obvious at this point who is asking what.

To answer your question - you can break the statement up, but it must still all be used, and be part of the same dialogue transaction, i.e.:

"And I'll do it and then everything will be fine."

Can become:

"And I'll do it," she said, eyes full of purpose. "And then everything will be fine."

But Not:

"And I'll do it," she said.

"And then everything will be fine," Richard finished.

Does that make sense?

Re: Questions, Concerns, etc.

[angstbunny]

That makes sense, but arrrrrrrrrrrrrgh, okay, that definitely ups the challenge factor.

If my entry ends up a hot mess, I blame you.