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individual_68 February 17 2011, 22:36:25 UTC
this fic is absolutely perfect

The characterisation of the two kahlans is spot on, and cara is just incredible, I like this version. Totally what happened in torn *nods*

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orange_creative February 18 2011, 07:03:32 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it, I had a blast writing it.

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synergyfox February 18 2011, 00:12:56 UTC
Omg! I really, really like this fic. I like how you did it with the two Kahlans. It's pretty awesome. And I really liked the ending! Specially with this bit here.

The times she had spent alone to herself were filled in with Cara-always there, watching, and guarding. There had been comfort, and understanding; distance and intimacy.

That bit!

O_O Epic.

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orange_creative February 18 2011, 07:04:52 UTC
One of my favorite lines too. I'm glad you think it's epic! :D I like epic. Thanks for reading!

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rhyfeddu February 18 2011, 05:32:09 UTC
I was just thinking, "I miss her LotS fics". Swear! And here you are. :)

The was incredible. It was like "condensed-epic". LOL So much (feeling/story) in a tidy lil' package.

My fav part was when Cara went and retrieved heart!Kahlan and Dennee watched and the penny dropped there. Perfect.

Thanks for this. :D

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orange_creative February 18 2011, 07:09:04 UTC
Awww, thanks! I wish I could've done more with it, but alas, other projects await!

HEART!KAHLAN!!! That's totally how I'm going to refer to her.

Thanks for reading, I'm really glad you liked it. :3

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puffy_wuffy February 18 2011, 11:44:08 UTC
Two Kahlans both alike in dignity, fall in love with Cara, in Aydindril, where you lay your scene. SO AWESOME.

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orange_creative February 18 2011, 19:16:51 UTC
Wow, you made it sound so much cooler. :o

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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orange_creative February 18 2011, 19:17:45 UTC
Thank you, I'm very happy you enjoyed it. :)

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