Fic: Privacy, A Series of Scenes

[angelicsinner]

Title: Privacy, A Series of Scenes
Author: AngelicSinner / VixenRaign
Pairing: Kahlan/Cara (pre-slash for now, but more than that soon), previous Richard/Kahlan, one-sided Dahlia->Cara
Rating: G - R (RATED R THIS TIME)
Warnings: Contains Femslash, and my rampant reinterpretation of how things may have gone after the end of Season Two. (Also

Comments

[greatshow]

I like how you say this update isn't for asexuals! LOL! There are actually some asexuals who relieve themselves in much the same way (although most will say it still has nothing to do with sexual attraction, which leaves me baffled... Because how else are you going to get turned on?)

Anyway, great update. You did well. Nothing to worry about. Although, I will likely be changing something now in one of my updates, LOL.

But, yeah... Kahlan has hopefully learned her lesson about snooping/spying... Wait, what am I talking about? In this case, I wouldn't want her to learn her lesson... Unless it's a lesson from Cara on how to pleasure yourself...thoroughly.

[angelicsinner]

I'm glad this scene went over well with you! (And I agree about the asexual thing you said-- how is self-sexual-gratification nonsexual? Huh?)
But what is this about you changing something in one of your updates? May I ask what? Or why? Or if I should be apologizing/smirking/grinning like a madwoman?
And don't worry-- Cara will educate Kahlan in many things. But self-pleasure will not be one of them. She's too much of a hands-on kind of teacher... ;-)

[greatshow]

You don't have to apologize for anything. Let's just say great minds think alike. Fans seem to love the "Kahlan watches Cara please herself" idea because it's been done in quite a few fics. Even so, yours was special and really great. I just feel that I should back away from that (scripting that) now, LOL. Don't think mine will measure up, especially since yours was so sweet at the same time. Also, it's been spoiled now, LOL; I prefer people to be surprised.

[chickinwhite]

See? I told you: YES YOU CAN!
Very well done.(And actually one of my ideas... ;o), LOL!)
Delicious mixture of hotness and emotion...

*if she had to actually witness the D’Haran in Cara’s bed she may lose any decorum she might have been expected to have as the Mother Confessor.*
-had to sigh in relieve, though I love jealous-Kahlan...
Stop biting nails, now! No need!! OK?

[angelicsinner]

This had been one of your ideas? I could have started it much sooner if you'd just said so! =-P haha, just kidding. But The suggestion may have helped, who knows! =-)
I'm glad that she scene didn't become all about the sexy-- though I'm even more glad that people got more than just the steamy bits from it as well! And as for Jealous!Kahlan?... She's not going anywhere. tehehe-- keep an eye out. There'll be more of her soon!
And I'll give my nails a bit of a break, but not for too long... There's more "Adult-Themed"-stuff to come (this is, obviously, just the first real step towards the eventual Kahlan/Cara *shared* sexual-gratification)!
Thanks for the review!!

[orange_rocks1]

You have no reason to be so worried. This update was not only smokin', but beautiful! I love a good sex scene to start my day lol. Oh and your sneaky kahlan icon cracked me up. That lil peeper lol. Really, great job. This is a great series.

[angelicsinner]

Haha! When I found that icon, I knew I had to get it-- just so I could be ready for this exact moment! =-D I'm glad it made you laugh.
I'm happy that it worked for you; I was completely out of my depth in this, but I knew I had to at least give it a shot... Glad you liked it!
Thanks for the review!! =-)

[e_quint]

Present:

I was so happy to wake up and see and update! What an awesome way to start the day! :D

Ooohhh… And I’m loving jealous, possessive Kahlan! Can’t help but wonder (especially after what she just witnessed) for how long she’ll be able to hold back until she acts on her feelings... ;)

And the sexy bits: I knew you could do it!!! Add it to your list: another type of ‘action’ you most certainly can write! You can stop biting your nails (and write some more of that.. ;D)!

And I think it’s great that you manage to write the “adult… sexual… mature-type…” while keeping the main trait of your writing, you know. Things are still sweet and caring and filled with emotion. It wasn’t all about the sexiness, it was still about feelings (and the physical attraction adds another facet to it), but your right: “some things, once seen? Cannot be unseen…” ;D

What can I say… LOVED it!

P.S.: had to divide the comment in 2. Exceeded length… ;P

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[angelicsinner]

As to what you said about being able to give compliments but not being so good at receiving them? ...(*points to self*)-- but there's a difference between someone complimenting you about something like your clothes, and a whole other about your mind. So I hope your mind will hear and absorb these compliments, dig their way in deep, and give you fortitude in your own abilities. In short? You're awesome. (No arguments

[angelicsinner]

God!... I am so embarrassed! When I posted this last night, at almost 1am here? I didn't even think about the fact that it'd be waiting for people to find first thing the next morning! For some reason, the idea of offering up "Adult Entertainment" to strangers first thing in the morning via the internet is just... I feel naughty. haha

[jaws_of_fenrir]

I like Cara's version of time to herself. Kahlan, where are you going!? I mean, I get that she doesn't want to get caught but she's going back, yeah? You don't just leave your Mord'Sith all post-orgasmic and alone, 's not done.

[angelicsinner]

I think Cara likes Cara's version of time to herself too... ;-) haha!
Kahlan's running away from her desires. Literally and metaphorically. Like she always did on the show... (*le sigh*) Don't worry-- she won't get too far. You'll see. =-)