Leah

[lotrsues]

If this were written for the author's benefit I would have mailed it to her, any flamers are acting entirely on their own initiatives.

Title: Not Always What It Seems
Author: Shining Star of Valinor (Age: 16)
Summary: "Another story about a normal (or not so normal) girl that finds herself in Middle Earth and discovers love isn’t always what it

Comments

[meepalicious]

T_T; My poor Balrog slayer.
... oh, and Leah is my Mum's name, too.

[_pyromatic]

The word sexy was used 4 times in that passage. Four times! That is so wrong...

[treeofsilver]

Just... no. My god, NO. *CRIES!* Poor Glorfindel! Poor Elrond! Poor Elladan and horse!

"'A man wrote a book about this world and about things that are to come in the future. I can’t tell you all that I know because revealing information that has not yet come to pass may be dangerous.'"

...

Poor Arda! I'm astonished that this Sue, who knows every ill that will befall Arda, can live with herself without divulging.

[_silverleaf_]

I think she made her point clear. Glorfindel is sexy. She doesn't has to rub it in, we already know it. Tsss.

[galenfea]

falls off by hitting her head on a low-hanging branch. She hits her head again on a rock on the ground and is magically transported to Rivendell

I think that at the end she should wake up in hospital after spending ten years in a coma due to extensive brain damage.