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Consumed -- spnspiration bingo card

Apr 03, 2015 21:06

Title: Consumed
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: Drabble ~ 150 words
Prompt: 'Parataxis' on my bingo card for spnspiration; a literary technique that favours short, simple sentences. Meant to mimic human thought and speech patterns.
Summary: Jared was consumed.
A/N: Parataxis for a fic was much harder than I thought! Feedback fuels the fire :)
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real person fiction, rating: pg, community: spnspiration, pairing: jensen/jared, fanfiction

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lotrspnfangirl April 4 2015, 01:49:07 UTC

Thank you!!! :)

emmatheslayer April 4 2015, 01:53:15 UTC

I loved this it was so intense and amazing

amberdreams April 4 2015, 07:09:50 UTC

Oh now that's a rarity not just for the style (which, by the way, nice job!) but because it's a J2 drabble. I don't think I've every seen J2 drabbled before!