Remix of Cesare: Direction

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Title: Direction
Author: Dee (cupiscent)
Original story: " Glance" by Cesare (almostnever)
Pairing: Orli/Dom
Rating: Adult (themes, language, sex)
Summary: It would be easier if there was someone to tell you what to do, but in the end, you have to decide which way you're facing.

Disclaimer: This is a non-profit, non-commercial work of fiction using the names and

Comments

[itstonedme]

This is just a brilliant rewrite, perfectly titled and then perfectly executed. There are nuances to this version not detected in the original; there are possible "directions" left hanging for the reader to do with as they wish. Going to Memories, this one.

[gattodoro]

Found this link on the MOME ballot (congratulations on the nomination) and just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your treatment of the concept and your use of language. Your evocation of Orlando's confusion and see-sawing emotional state is extremely affecting.