Perhaps the Greater for shirasade

Dec 15, 2007 21:49

Title: Perhaps the Greater
Characters/Pairings: Merry/Pippin
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Rating:
PG-13 for slash (obviously), brief nudity, and brief mention of sex.
Word Count: 1,827
Author’s Note:
For shirasade for lotr_sesa,
I really hope this is to your liking and your holiday season is wonderful!

The world is indeed full of peril, and in it there are many dark places; but still there is much that is fair; and though in all lands love is now mingled with grief, it grows perhaps the greater. )

rating:pg-13, peoples:hobbits, 2007, character:pippin, for:shirasade, by:cherie_morte, character:merry, type:fanfic, genre:slash, pairing:merry/pippin

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cherie_morte December 25 2007, 03:09:01 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Merry Christmas!

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aprilkat December 25 2007, 03:20:03 UTC
I love the way you inserted this scene believably into the narrative of their flight into the forest. Also, it made a lot of sense that, after all the being battered and frightened and trying to protect each other, they would finally allow themselves to express what might have always been hidden under the surface - and to come together. Very nice story.

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cherie_morte December 25 2007, 03:44:25 UTC
Thank you so much!

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baranduin December 25 2007, 08:46:41 UTC
What a sweet interlude this is!

“I was afraid you were going to go too far and lose me.”

I liked this passage for the little shadow of what Merry says to Pippin on the Pelennor when Merry finds him (er, movie-verse :-)

Lovely fic!

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cherie_morte December 25 2007, 16:31:32 UTC
Thank you :oD!

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wynterhawk December 31 2007, 15:23:36 UTC
This was fantastic! I held my breath all the way through and I really like how you've stuck this scene into the larger story. It was very sweet, and I would have liked to have seen it in the movie ;)

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cherie_morte January 1 2008, 01:03:24 UTC
Thank you so much! :D It would have been pretty nice to have those two going at it, though I guess I have to grudgingly admit they had a point in excluding it :P

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