Comments | lotr_sesa: "Gondor's Need." LOTR FPS. NC-17. Aragorn/Boromir

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"Gondor's Need." LOTR FPS. NC-17. Aragorn/Boromir

Dec 23, 2006 14:39

Title: "Gondor's Need"
Author: Barbara savageseraph
Recipient: cbpotts
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Aragorn/Boromir
Disclaimer: People and places belong to the Tolkien estate and New Line Cinema, not me. I just amuse myself with them for fun, not profit.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
Comments: Written for the 2006 LOTR Secret Santa Fic Exchange for cbpotts who asked for Boromir ( Read more... )

character:aragorn, 2006, character:boromir, for:cbpotts, rating:nc-17, pairing:aragorn/boromir, by:savageseraph, type:fanfic, genre:slash, peoples:men

Comments 5

cbpotts December 26 2006, 00:36:17 UTC

God, this is sixteen kinds of delicious. Thank you for the most lovely present!

More coherent feedback to follow after I have 2-3 hours sleep in a row.

aprilkat December 26 2006, 03:25:33 UTC

OMG, this is so stirring and dirty and beautifully written! There's a touch of poetry in the way he sees Aragorn laid out as more enticing than all those other sensory images.

Boromir brought him to the edge seven times, one for each level of the city the upstart hoped to claim

There's more than a bit of his father in him, isn't there?!

And I blurted out a laugh when Boromir said he would show him all the ways Gondor needs a king, because I of course could HEAR him say that.

I am glad to see that Boromir can envision the upside of having Aragorn as his king (you present that submissiveness SO ENTICINGLY - I wonder if Aragorn even knew this about himself).

cbpotts December 27 2006, 01:03:36 UTC

Ok, let me tell you how much I love this!

I love the firm, dom Boromir -- This: Aragorn was not the only one who had been waiting. was an awesome line, perfectly timed.

Your pacing is beautiful: the steady escalation of Boromir's rhetoric as Aragorn slips further and further into sub space was masterfully done. (No pun intended, but hey, if you like it, it's yours.)

After all, a King served his people's needs, and those needs were never truly sated.

is a perfect concluding line -- one I'd steal in a heartbeat if the moment arose.

Thank you for this -- it is one of my favorite Christmas Pressies.

butterballer December 27 2006, 16:05:42 UTC

i give (what's left of) my allegience to the King of Gondor and am now, Henceforth, a Boromir/Aragorn Fangirl.

talullahred December 28 2006, 11:47:57 UTC

It's been a long while since I read this pairing and I was pleasantly surprised. This doesn't go anywhere near sap but it's also not about cruel Boromir. He's just a man asserting himself in the most pleasurable of ways... ;)

Lovely smut!