The White City by burning_night

[burning_night]

Author: burning_night
Title: The White City
Rating: G
Theme: Ode To Arda
Elements: Rejoice/Voice
Author's Notes: I've never attempted an ode, so this was both fun and nerve-wracking. Hopefully 'voiced' counts as using my word ;)Summary: An ode to the Tower of the Sun, the City of the King.
Word Count: 69

Comments

[dreamflower02]

How beautiful! It's just as I imagine it.

And yes, "voiced" counts!

[burning_night]

Thank you so much! I'm glad voiced counts :) (And sorry for the long wait on this reply)

[brookeoflorien]

This is lovely! I really like all the imagery in it.

And I would say voiced counts as using your word. :D

[burning_night]

Thank you! I did have a very strong image in my mind while writing (and sorry for the late reply)

[hhimring]

I like how you've arranged the two halves: first the sounds summoning, and then the view of the city in the morning.

[burning_night]

I actually hadn't thought of it in that way, I guess I must have subconsciously done that? I like it though. Thank you! (And sorry for such a late reply!)

[shirebound]

The love of the poet for his/her city really shines through.

[burning_night]

I'm glad, that was the kind of feeling I was aiming for. Thank you! (And sorry for the late reply!)

[blslarner]

Ah, the thought of that great wedding cake of a city always tends to lift the heart! Thank you so!

[burning_night]

It does sort of look like one, I have to admit xD Thank you! (And sorry for the late reply!)