A Brief Doubt by Nath

[mrowe]

Author name: Nath
Recipient's name: Larner
Title: A brief doubt
Rating: G
Request: "I'd like a gift in which someone is having second thoughts about a commitment he has made."
Summary: Boromir has second thoughts about the quest, but finds his resolve again.

Comments

[dreamflower02]

A pivotal moment; doubts had to abound for all of them. Boromir's own doubts were well-founded, and now the die is cast!

(Can you please edit in an LJ-cut?)

[mrowe]

(cut done)

If only Boromir had listened to his doubts a bit more; on the other hand, the story might have turned out a lot less happy in the end.

[engarian]

Well done, Nath. A truly excellent point of time in which to have second (and even third) thoughts.

- Erulisse (one L)

[mrowe]

Thank you:) even if I'm not sure that different actions by Boromir would have given a good outcome...

[ceshaughnessy]

Excellent story, Nath!I can easily see Boromir having these thoughts. I really enjoy your writing.

[mrowe]

Thank you;-)

[mrowe]

At least he had a chance to redeem his actions, but yes, poor Boromir.

[burning_night]

Really nice! Poor Boromir, the ring subtly working on him is shown nicely here. Great story :)

[mrowe]

Thank you:-)