Naked in the Dark by Antane

[antane]

Author: Antane
Title: Naked in the Dark
Rating: PG
Author Notes: Frodo at the Fire as he claims the Ring and is claimed by it and also claimed by another. Inspired by jan-u-wine’s poem of the same name. My element was ‘mountain’ which is very interesting as I had already written much of this before I received that. Though the first part deals with the

Comments

[shirebound]

He tenderly caresses my broken hand and heart,
telling me how much he wishes he could hear
the tale that will be told of us
I cannot help but smile as I look into his shining eyes

How lovely.

[antane]

Glad you enjoyed, my dear!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

[foxrafer]

This is a very moving poem; I really like it.

and even as the world ends around us
rejoices that I am free
Beautiful line

[antane]

Thank you! Ever hopeful, ever loving Sam... :) Gotta to love him.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

[armarielrozita]

Stunning. Almost Whitmanesque at times. And the short lines in the last part are an excellent contrast to the almost frenzied narrative in the middle. Frodo's viewpoint is very well rendered here!

[antane]

Thank you so much for your high praise, my dear! Glad you enjoyed!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Volume 80 / Issue 11

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[antane]

Thank you for posting me on your site.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

[blonddemon]

This is a very touching, memorable poem.

[antane]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)