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Honey-speak Villain by Adonnen Estenniel

Mar 26, 2011 09:51

Author: Adonnen Estenniel (alphien )
Title: "Honey-speak Villain"
Rating: PG
Theme: poem
Elements: noun - beast
Summary: The downfall of Gríma Wormtongue.
Wordcount: 177

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annual challenge: poetry, 2011, april, month: 2011 april

Comments 5

kayleelupin April 18 2011, 17:00:04 UTC

Is there more to this, Adonnen? I like it so far...and I'm curious about the numbers.

alphien April 18 2011, 18:42:48 UTC

There is still a verse or two yet, and explanation for the superscript. Unfortunately LJ ate my post, and as I'm on my mobile right now there's nothing I can do about this until I get home. So everything should be in order in a few hours. Sorry about the mess.

armarielrozita April 18 2011, 23:21:09 UTC

Wow, almost missed this one...the use of language is stunningly evocative, almost shakespearian, with a touch of Robert Browning too. I like!

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blslarner April 19 2011, 18:11:18 UTC

Definitely Shakespearian in feel, and well describes the Worm of Edoras! Love the descriotion of Gandalf's reappearance in Rohan!

foxrafer April 20 2011, 15:30:09 UTC

Like a carnivore-worm you crawl and devour.
Very evocative.