Diminishing Reality, by periantari

Nov 15, 2010 23:12

Author: periantari
Title: Diminishing Reality
Rating: G
Theme: Pairs
Elements: back, forth
Summary: A scene from the chapter The Flight to the Ford
Word Count: 100
Author's Notes: This is the first idea that popped into my head when I saw “back and forth” so blame me for liking Frodo angst with the Morgul wound. ;)

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labourslamp November 16 2010, 04:28:02 UTC
Painful, yeah, but he's pressing on despite all that. So if it's angst, it's not all angst. Good job!

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periantari November 16 2010, 04:29:30 UTC
Thank you very much! =)
It's hope too--i tend to like to end on a somewhat hopeful note.

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clodia_metelli November 16 2010, 10:03:33 UTC
//He felt like he was still on the cusp of a bad nightmare where the living world was hard to discern.//

That's so vivid, I can really see that. Or rather, imagine the experience. Lovely drabble, thank you!

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periantari November 17 2010, 02:54:21 UTC
Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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shirebound November 16 2010, 13:13:55 UTC
Poor dear valiant, resilient Frodo! This is nicely written.

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periantari November 17 2010, 02:54:37 UTC
Thanks so much Janet-- always glad for your support. :)

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thunderatiger November 16 2010, 13:18:06 UTC
Angsty, yes, but I love the hope in it. It concerns me, though, that Frodo isn't looking for hope because of his own desires. He's looking for hope because he doesn't want his friends to despair. It's a powerful characterization stroke, albeit a self-defeating one for poor Frodo. Nicely written!

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periantari November 17 2010, 02:56:18 UTC
I think during the whole two week period from Weathertop to Rivendell was always a struggle for Frodo to think of his friends and not only himself... it's the selfless part of him that i've always adored.

It's an honor to get a comment from you for i've always adored your fics! Thanks so much for your comment. :)

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lovethosehobbit November 16 2010, 17:12:01 UTC
Sigh...poor Fro'

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periantari November 17 2010, 02:56:54 UTC
Indeed, poor Fro! :'(

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