Fic: If Not by Choice 5/7 (Derek/Jackson, NC-17)

[lostyoursoul]

Title: If Not by Choice (5/7?)
Rating: NC-17 overall, PG-13 for this part
Pairing: Derek/Jackson
Spoilers: Season 1
Warnings: Slash, possible canon-timeline mistakes, explicit sex
Word Count: 5506 words in this part
Disclaimer: Oh, how I wish they were mine. But nothing here belongs to me, except for the plot.
Summary: He'd have to go and take a

Comments

[mindoneil]

[thefrozenheart]

That was amazing honey! I love how you described Jackson waking up in the morning <3 And ok, I know it was exactly this, but, awnnn Derek cooked breakfast for them :3
I feel so sorry for Derek, it broke my heart when Jackson, his mate, "rejected his touch".
And OMG, you're a genius! Of course Jackson didn't give the right bottle to Lydia on purpose ♥ ♥ ♥
Thank you for another amazing chapter honey! I'm already looking forward to the next one ^_^

[charlie_jae]

I just had to read this one before bed. I'm so glad you have a few more chapters. You write these two so well and make me more than believe that they could some how work together.

Reading things from Derek's side was painful but at the same time I wanted to smack him for lying. Though again I understood why he lied, his logic was based on Jackson's own reasoning so it was nicely done.

I can't wait to see more.

[mirime]

AHHHH what a cliffhanger!! i really love your take of these events! can't wait for the next chapter!

[kdsaj2]

This was absolutely wonderful!
I agree with the first poster I too love Jackson's conflicting emptying in this chapter and even though everything is quite fragmented it still flows very well.