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amyo67 September 14 2010, 19:14:31 UTC
Lovely chapter. "Flow dab", great anagram.

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lostwolfchats September 14 2010, 19:20:13 UTC
hee! Not subtle but it is a dream.

Hugs honey - hope you are well.

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spellweaver731 September 15 2010, 01:59:46 UTC
I like that you made sure to put in that Rose could have made a life for herself in Pete's world. I've seen way too many fics where Rose is incapable of going on without the Doctor. She might not wants too (neither of them want that, clearly) but she is a strong person, a person who is never passive. Rose lives because she doesn't know what else to do.

Loved the dream sequence. Can't wait for more :)

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susanb03 September 15 2010, 03:30:39 UTC
Yea and nice update

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lostwolfchats September 16 2010, 05:44:00 UTC
I'm sorry - I don't understand...

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emraldeyedauter September 23 2010, 02:54:47 UTC
Its very true how much the Doctor and Rose didn't have to deal with. Loved the reference to the Scooby Doo Gang and the endings of the credits. I think Rose has grown considerably despite not wanting to stay in Pete's world. Although its a story I still sorry for those that have to clean up the mess and its an even sadder story for the remaining survivors but in this case perhaps death is the kinder option.

I confess the dab flow confused me until Mickey mentioned switching the letters around and then it became all very clear so thanks for that clue.

So a beach and dab flow lol Perhaps we are getting closer.

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