brigits_flame: July Week 2 Entry: It hurts when I do this

[lostwhiterabbit]

The Same

The air was cold and dry, so that every inhale pierced the throat and burned the lungs. Snow lay blanketed over the forest floor, glittering silver in the cold light of the moon. Trees stood like grim sentinels, naked against the black sky. The silence was punctuated with the sharp staccato breaths of a boy, the heat from his breathing

Comments

[hathorx]

This was really well written. The setting and context was intriguing and I liked the interaction between the brothers. Quite dark, well done!

[lostwhiterabbit]

Thank you very much~ I'm glad you liked it.

[intermezzo_poet]

I loooooooooove the descriptive, gentle ending. Soft, white snow covering remnant chaos. Nice!

[lostwhiterabbit]

Thank you~

Interesting.

[merthin]

I thought for sure you would have the two brothers be the same person with multiple personalities. I enjoyed the way it played out and the colorful descriptions. Very gruesome.

[lostwhiterabbit]

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it~