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First Moves, for jaydblu

Dec 21, 2011 08:32

Title: First Moves
Author: haldoor
Recipient: jaydblu
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Nothing you haven't seen before; slight violence
Summary: A disagreement over Sawyer's stash leads to some interesting moves.
Author notes: The prompt I chose was 'exploring our differences' and the pairing was Jack/Sawyer. It's old school stuff, i.e. Season One when Boone was still ( Read more... )

lost hohoho 2011: fic

Comments 6

jaydblu December 29 2011, 04:44:15 UTC

Well. :D

Can I just say, I feel pretty damned priviledged to have something that awesome and detailed written for me, honestly. I mean, I loved it. I loved the whole feel of it, how Sawyer and Jack were on opposite sides, how Sawyer was both picking at Jack and making a move on him at the same time. I loved how it went from circling each other to full on manly making out, to the transition (despite the reluctance!)to the fucking. Again the details, awesome. Just hot and just really male (love that they had to problem being dirty) and sexy.

And the ending...typical of the two. And oh yeah, I would love to see it continue. :)

Thank you so much for this, it's awesome and more than I could have hoped for! A thousand apologies for talking to long to get to it. Thank you again! :)

haldoor January 8 2012, 04:10:08 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, babe! I knew a little bit of hot old school porn between these two would be right for you, and it was so good to get going with them again after so long away. Yeah, the not caring about the dirty and just into it really has to be a part of the way I see them, especially Sawyer, and you know how the duality of their relationship goes, so despite the antagonism, you just know it'll happen again (and again and again!).

Thank again! ;-)

jaydblu January 8 2012, 17:36:41 UTC

Ah!!! After I read and commented on it, I started wondering if it was you! Thanks honey! :D This must have been tough for you, haha. :)

haldoor January 8 2012, 18:07:36 UTC

Oh yeah; really, really tough ;-P

zelda_zee December 29 2011, 05:41:54 UTC

Hooray for old school J/S! That always hits the spot! Super hot fic and a fun read, I really enjoyed it.

haldoor January 8 2012, 04:10:44 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad this hit the spot for you! ;-)