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[lostscore]

Title: Social Suicide
Author: lostscore
Rating: PG-13 ish. (T)
Warnings/Pairings: If you haven’t beaten KH2 or played Chain of Memories there could be some spoiler issues. I’m here to tell a story that isn’t necessarily a romantic one, but it does and will contain pairings of both a heterosexual and homosexual nature. Presently, Riku and Kairi are the only

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[xxwolf_cubxx]

i be reading this on FF my name be MR

[xanthos_samurai]

I liked the little bits I got to read earlier, but I definitely enjoyed getting to read them within the context of the chapter, which was awesome as usual.

I know this is kind of a silly little thing to fix on, but I love the detail about Sora's eyebrows getting singed off. It's a detail that really helps to take the story out of a "game" setting and remind us that these are real people and that things like fires have real physical implications. And of course Sora's indignant reaction to it was hilarious.

I really like the little four-way relationship you have between Sora, Donald, Goofy and Axel. All of their personalities bounce off each other nicely and you've got everyone's voice down wonderfully. And the detail about Axel being a hoarder makes me happy for some reason. It FITS him.

Really awesome chapter! I'm glad you continued!