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lostscore

Fic: Social Suicide - Part 4

Dec 27, 2008 19:43

Title: Social Suicide - Part 4 - Part 3 - Part 2 - Part 1
Rating: PG-ish or T-ish, if you prefer.
Warnings/Pairings: Primarily Axel/Sora with implications of Axel/Roxas and Riku/Kairi. Spoilers for events in KH, CoM and the ending of KH2. Yaoi.
Wordcount: 2300+
Disclaimer: Square and Disney's, not mine.
Summary: Narrowly escaping a dreadful ( Read more... )

donald, axelxsora, cid, leon, social suicide, goofy, fanfiction, axel, sora

Comments 4

flowerpot December 29 2008, 00:41:40 UTC

I'm so sorry not to leave a comment that pertains to this particular bit of writing.. But I must ask, because I have a hunch that it was you who wrote something.. And if not I'm sorry for taking up your time. But did you, or did you not, once write a drabble or short fic which involved Saïx and Pluto? Again, so sorry for dragging it up, but I've been looking for that everywhere and I just can't find it. It was ages ago that I read it, but it's stuck in my head since, it was that amusing.

lostscore December 29 2008, 01:00:26 UTC

Unfortunately, if I did, it was a drabble and it's been since lost to the ages of a dead computer.

Sorry I couldn't help you further, but I suppose you could always research the drabble requests on KHnews.

flowerpot December 29 2008, 01:10:32 UTC

Oh bother. Thank you for responding so quickly however, I'll go take a look at that comm and hopefully it'll pop up. I've been googling to no avail.

Happy Holidays!

xanthos_samurai December 30 2008, 18:22:53 UTC

The first line was really excellent - it REALLY grabbed my attention and has all sorts of fun implications as to what Axel HAS been dreaming about. Also the idea that it was the first night that Axel dreamed really caught my interest. What prevented him from dreaming before? Or had he dreamed and this is just the first time he remembered?

The "Red" made me fangirl hard. (I'm sure you did that KNOWING it would make me fangirl!) I'm not sure whether it was a shout-out or if your Xigbar would also call Axel "Red" but it made me a very very very happy Xan. The way you wrote the two of them interacting makes me so very happy. More Xigbar/Axel!

I really enjoyed the flashback scenes, but I thought that the breakfast table scene the next morning was really fantastically done. There are so many distinct personalities here and you managed to weave them all around each other perfectly. Also - and I probably don't even need to mention this - Demyx zombie is WIN.

“If I could ask a question before you four leave, Axel? I hope it isn’t ( ... )