Fic: Sherlock: Presence (Sherlock/John, R Rated)

[lostgirlslair]

Title: Presence
Rating: Rated R (FRM)
Fandom: BBC's Sherlock
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Feedback: Adored! (lostgirlslair @ yahoo DOT com)
Spoilers: Set after A Scandal in Belgravia
Disclaimer: Not mine, but they're so pretty I couldn't resist.

Summary: Sherlock has recently noticed a shift in his own perceptions, but he can’t quite figure out when it

Comments

[fennishjournal]

Oh, this is just perfect. I really adore the ending - seems like you were able to talk John out of his need to communicate excessively - and wow, is this ever smoking hot.
You are brilliant, my dear!

[lostgirlslair]

Yes! John finally decided to cooperate. Of course, there will be discussion, but he's agreed to leave it for another fic. :-D

Thank you, sweetie!

[1trackmind]

Very nicely done! You nailed both their voices.

[lostgirlslair]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[anactoria]

Really enjoyed this. I like these lines particularly: Sherlock can feel it, skulking at the edges of his awareness. A great, hulking beast shy of the fire of his thoughts and simply waiting for them to go out before it descends upon him.

And "You taste like chemistry."

And the little giggle at the end there. Lovely!

[lostgirlslair]

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!

[katekat1010]

I love how everything slips out of Sherlock's mouth inadvertently - it's so sweet having his unconscious work for (against?) him so well!! this was awesome sweetie - hot, adorable, sexy, happy making all in equal turns!

[lostgirlslair]

Hee! He ha a a hard time with the overthinking, I think. ;-D Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you liked it!

[sabbrielle]

Okay, this is so fucking perfect I don't even. I'm going to read this again tomorrow and leave you a proper review.

[lostgirlslair]

Hee! Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!