Comments | lostgirlslair: Fic: Exertion 2/2, Giles/Wesley, NC-17 (FRAO)

lostgirlslair

Fic: Exertion 2/2, Giles/Wesley, NC-17 (FRAO)

Dec 01, 2006 21:41

Title: Exertion (2/2)
Author: Lostgirl
Pairing: Giles/Wesley
Rating: NC-17 (FRAO)
Summary: Wesley's working through some issues.
Spoilers: Set post Not Fade Away.
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Comments 14

soft_princess December 2 2006, 04:25:02 UTC

GAH. Just--gorgeous. I have no words.

Wow.

lostgirlslair December 3 2006, 02:59:07 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ::squishes you::

antennapedia December 2 2006, 05:40:38 UTC

Yes. Um. Yes. Indeed. Thank you for this. Complete weakness for the sparring-turns-sexy thing.

A fascinating setup, too, with the coma and the magic, and quite interesting what happened during the sex. Followup is definitely possible on this one :)

lostgirlslair December 3 2006, 03:00:03 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

katekat1010 December 2 2006, 07:28:34 UTC

my knees are weak. this was so worth cliffhangering for! i love loved loved the way the fight sex turns out!!! i think my favorite part is when Wes gets his own feral grin. Well, and the sexy sex that happens after.

one tiny edit: or a heartbeat, he couldn't breath, couldn't move, could only feel the rush of it, surging through him and pouring out. the "breath" in this line should be "breathe" shouldn't it?

lostgirlslair December 3 2006, 03:03:01 UTC

Thank you very much, sweetie! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It had a lot of fun writing it!

(Oh! Thank you even more! It is now fixed. ::nods firmly:: ::hugs you:: )

helenkacan December 2 2006, 17:43:49 UTC

So yummy and hot. And I so love any universe where Wesley.Did.Not.Die. Because that is so cruel.

Also, I agree with katekat1010's edit request. breath=noun; breathe=verb

Thanks for the treat. And, um, "Stay".

Happy hugs,
Me.

lostgirlslair December 3 2006, 03:03:48 UTC

Thank you, sweetie! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! The edit is all done. ::nods firmly:: I had a great time writing this one. *G*

::hugs you::

floating_brain December 2 2006, 18:06:04 UTC

Weee, that was excellent and I loved every bit of it (especially Drunken!Wes and of course the hot ending). I always like post NFA fics (where Wes is alive, of course), but this one was an exceptional read and everything down to the tiny details fell just right in place.
*bounces happily*

lostgirlslair December 3 2006, 03:05:08 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!