Men with Secrets

Jun 21, 2007 21:38

Title: Men with Secrets ( Read more... )

challenge #50: free for all, sayid, eko, hurley, locke, sawyer, jack

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morlockiness June 22 2007, 04:57:03 UTC
My favorite one was Locke cause it's so Lost, you know? They're all great though. This one was sooo much better than mine!

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tinkerbell99 June 22 2007, 15:02:22 UTC
You know what I really enjoyed about this? I really liked the fact that each section - each character - has his own voice projected in the way you wrote it. Hurley's section was my favorite. I love the way it sounds just like Hurley speaking:

Not the whole being-a-jerk thing <--- That is very much him.

And I loved the reference to super powers, because that is very much Hurley, too. :-)

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zelda_zee June 22 2007, 18:01:53 UTC
I really liked this, especially the little surprises it held - Sayid remembering his mother, Locke being a substitute teacher, Sawyer being a genius. All these 'secrets' fit the characters so well. And great Hurley voice!

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failoh June 24 2007, 23:05:45 UTC
Oh my gosh, I really enjoyed this. With so much angsty stuff, it's such a treat to read something as simply happy as this. And you bought Eko back and made John and Sayid happy-two miracles. In all seriousness, it was a really sweet story and I enjoyed reading it a lot.

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crickets July 2 2007, 01:18:49 UTC
Saw this nommed over at lost_fic_awards and I gotta say, this is beautiful. I love Sawyers. I could so see that. I could see all of these. Excellent work!

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