Comments | lostdreamer56: "Water-colored Life (In Five Parts)," Nathan/Claire, R

lostdreamer56

"Water-colored Life (In Five Parts)," Nathan/Claire, R

Jun 06, 2007 19:48

Title - Water-colored Life (In Five Parts)
Rating - R
Pairing - Nathan/Claire
Written for - heroes50 19. Apathy
Spoilers/Warnings - Up through 1.23 "How to Stop an Exploding Man," heavy sexuality
Summary - He isn’t the one she wanted to see, but he stands before her anyway - a breathing reminder of her failure
Disclaimer - I don't own "Heroes" nor the ( Read more... )

heroes50, heroes, heroes_fic, nathan/claire, fic

Comments 7

fading_spark June 7 2007, 01:29:56 UTC

First of all, I adore your new header. It's absolutely beautiful. ♥

This story? God this is fucking brilliant. Swear to god, it's just gorgeous. Again, you leave me speechless and stunned at the immense talent you have for writing this ship. I absolutely love this story. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us hon. *hug* ♥

lostdreamer56 June 7 2007, 01:41:47 UTC

Hee, thanks!

:) It was strange, I read it the first time and I was "ooh... not sure" but then I kind of edited it and it then occurred to me that I had just built it up. *pounds head against nearest object* Apparently I don't understand my own writing sometimes. But thank you! I love your feedback and *blushing*

*gazes at icon and drools* I need an icon from that adorable picture. :)

dragonydreams June 7 2007, 02:31:47 UTC

That was incredible. I liked seeing Nathan's slow progression to healing, and how Claire was healing with him.

strangest_love June 7 2007, 04:31:04 UTC

Wow, that was so beautiful! And tender. And read.
Simply wonderful.

Thank you so much for writing it.

srichard June 7 2007, 08:56:51 UTC

Mmmm, very dark. I wish we could see how Nathan er...gets his groove back after this, as we know he will.

nurse_stiney June 18 2007, 21:10:34 UTC

Wow. That was beautifully...tragic. ;) Everything in this piece was just wonderfully done, from the title to the ending line = BRILLIANT. I must admit, Nathan/Claire are just so interesting together, whether romantically or not. (Although it's the romantic aspects that make it REALLY interesting, lol...)
May I friend you, by the way? I notice that a lot of your stories are not open to public viewing, and since this was so fantabulous, I was hoping to read more of your work? ::puppy-dog eyes::

lostdreamer56 June 20 2007, 04:39:48 UTC

Wow, thank you so much!

Anyway, I went back and unlocked all of my Nathan/Claire stuff. It was a defensive move, but I figured I should open them all back up again. I hope you enjoy!